"Dare me, now," he said firmly.
My favorite line. I liked your one-shot.
Severous seemed a bit ooc and Lily could have been a bit less of an emotional drama queen, but James was just adorable.
Wish there was a little bit with Sirius :P You gotta love Sirius. Report Review
oh so fluffy! its been quite a wile since i got on hpff so i am happy 2 announce that this story has gotten me ready 2 read more!!! hahaha, (in case ur not sure, thats a good thing) and this was a reallly sweet story. truth or dares always a good way to write it out! 10/10!!! xP Report Review
Aw! :] I've never been huge on reading Lily/James but I love the ship. This story was honestly very well written and really cute. Stupendous job! :D Report Review
I LOVED THAT! I LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT! Great job! Report Review
that is really cute but i think it would of been beter if truth or dare went for longer Report Review
I loved it! It was so sweet! Amazing job! 10/10 =) Report Review
awww that was really cute! i love it when lily admits she loves james! and your banner is amazing! could you, if you have time that is, make me one for well...two of my stories? love the story! 10/10 x 10/10 x 10/10 x 10/10 okay you get the idea ;) Report Review
This was the most totally awesome wonderful fantabulous story ever!!! I loved it! 10/10 could u maybe read my story "Last Christmas" if you get a chance? Plz. Report Review
Im crying that was so sweet lol omg!!! i cant stop
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i loved it. it was really sweat. Report Review
Awww so cute!!! I love it:) Report Review
Okay, so I read this a really long time ago and added it to my favorites and then when I reread it just now I didn't remember it at all. But it was so good! Seriously, one of the best I've read in a long time. You have a really clean, organized writing style, and the whole thing made complete sense. And I loved how you made the kiss good, but not too graphic. It was really sweet.
Anyway, great job! I'm off to see your Author page! Report Review
I loved it!
I thought it might have been that they got together because of a game of truth and dare - which can be a way too overused storyline - but you took an old favourite and twisted it to make it something new and different and brilliant! It was incredibly cute and I love that you didn't overdo the moment . I liked the line Lily felt like crying. It wasn't fair, it wasn't fair at all, because it just seemed to fit that she finally realised it and...yeah.
Great story, 10/10! Report Review
I loved this wasn't the best thing I ever read but it was good . I liked it thought it had a bit of a twist on the james/lily ship. Report Review
How adorable. I loved it. No SPEGQ (Spelling, Puncuation, Ewness, Grammer, Quotation) And a great outline. I liked the origionality of it too. But, you might need to get a little Up-To-Date with the Lily/Sev convo, unless your going a tad bit AU. But thats my only question. But you did a awosme job; couldn't expect anymore out of this story. Report Review
Awww...this was sweet. It wasn't really what I expected from the summary, but that's not a bad thing at all! Awesome job! Report Review
Totally going in my favourites! I loved it, you write so well and this was so sweet and fun! Excellent work,
Love xX mOoNdAnCe Xx Report Review
TOO FRICKING CUTE! SOOO ROMANTIC! I CAN HARDLY STAND IT! I LOVED IT!
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toast... yum... Report Review
This was cute. xD Report Review
Great.Very romantic, but not of a sappy sort- the ending was especially good. You are a mature author it seems.10/10 Report Review
That is so sweet! Loved it. Report Review
That was so cute. I love it. Report Review
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