{reviewid: 1439049, reviewer: 'Restricted_Beauty'}
30th May 2007:
way to quick. I mean its the first chapter. BLOODY HELL
already hugging and a stuttering malfoy?? you seriously need to edit this, loose the stuttering and hugs put in hate and snide remarks maybe a hex or two. I think you have the potential to make this fic into something great. The summary was so nice but then it just went.
P.S: LONGER CHAPTERS.
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{reviewid: 1389214, reviewer: 'beautifulxdisaster9493'}
21st April 2007:
wow. i really liked it. please continue. i am definately adding this to my favorites.
if you get a chance please check out my page; i just wrote the first chapter.
but please continue writing; i like where this story is goingso far!
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{reviewid: 1363615, reviewer: 'RubyRed'}
3rd April 2007:
Great start! i really hope you continue this.
Author's Response: I will be continuing it. Thank you for revieiwing. The next chapter is currently being written. :P
~Gabby~
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{reviewid: 1363075, reviewer: 'irish_dorcas'}
3rd April 2007:
this looks really good!i can't wait to read more!i was just wondering where's voldy in this whole situation!!please update soon!please!10/10
Author's Response: Thank you. I may be updating soon. I apperciate the review. :P
~Gabby~
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{reviewid: 1362933, reviewer: 'emerald_dragon925'}
3rd April 2007:
This is good. Please update soon! I love it. 10/10
~Emerald_Dragon925
Author's Response: Thank you. I will be updating soon. :P
~Gabby~
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{reviewid: 1362932, reviewer: 'The_Lily_And_Her_Stag'}
3rd April 2007:
This is great! I loved it! please update real soon! 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I apperciate it.
~Gabby~
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{reviewid: 1362770, reviewer: 'Mwa%20ha%20ha%20Voldie%20himself%20should%20be%20proud%20of%20my%20evil%20laugh'}
| Review #7, by Mwa ha ha Voldie himself should be proud of my evil laugh | Ch.1: How It Began |
3rd April 2007:
Hey
That is such a good start to a story, Update soon please!*!
please please please!!!
"gets down on knees and begs" please!
Author's Response: I will be updating soon. Thank you for reviewing.
~Gabby~
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{reviewid: 1362426, reviewer: 'emerald_princess92'}
2nd April 2007:
This is awesome! Its really good for your first story! I hopr you update soon! 10/10!
Author's Response: I will be updating soon! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I apperciate it!
~Gabby~
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{reviewid: 1362309, reviewer: 'life_writtendown'}
2nd April 2007:
its good
Author's Response: Thank you!
~Gabby~
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{reviewid: 1362123, reviewer: 'Lav'}
2nd April 2007:
Please tell me the next chapters are going to be longer.
Right?
RIGHT?!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and yes the next chapters will be longer. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
~Gabby~
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