nice 1 chapter story

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i loved it..
"What, no good morning snog? No heartwarming hug for the man who sent you wheeling into an abyss of passion all night long? No thank you for the post sex cuddling? Where is my gratitude woman?"

"Draco," she pointed at him. “Now. "

i was cracking up at this point...just one little thing...the humour was apparent in the beginning, but it kinda evaporated towards the end...maybe if a little humour was added in here and there..this would be the perfect story..

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that was a nice story...i hope it has a sequel

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that was adorable! i love it

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This is your most realistic work I think, and I appreciate it for that. If Draco and Hermione ever were to actually date I imagine this is much how it would be, good job. On the other hand I feel the story needs more. Either a beginning with a lead up to how they got to be in the position they were in the first place (I don't mean write out the sex-scene) or more on how Draco copes with the truth and how it all turns out in the end. Your writing is good though, I like it :)

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Oh bonkers. Why did you end it there?! I wanted to know more!!! Lol, i think this was great! I really loved it and it was fabtastic! =D

xx
Love Nicki.

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i loved this, but i think you should make a sequel!!! :) 7/10

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Hey there! I liked how you kept Draco in character throughout the story. In some fanfics I've read Draco seems to be modeled after a saint lol. I also liked how Hermione and him clash together slightly-or greatly-but still manage to get past their differences :)

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DRACO MALFOY UR SUCH A GIT

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I loved it! Awsome I'm a Huge Dramione Shipper, There made for eachother JKR can Disagree all she wants, In my world There for eachother! PLZ check out my dramione fic " Mission Malfoy" thx so much!

Happy Holidays :)

Rilla

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i thought the story went on too soon. so they're getting married? but stilll.it's nice! merry christmas! and keep writing! maybe a sequel.

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Aw that was cute! But where's the sequel!? lol You should def make one if you haven't. You can't just end the story like that! lol Good job!

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This was awesome!

Thanks for sharing!

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i like it i think its very well writen=)

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brilliant. absolutely brilliant.

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ITS AWESOME!!!

I loved it!...

u did a great job!

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good one!! so much like draco!! excellent! :)) 10/10

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Wonderful! I loved this story. It's written beautifully, you have a very engaging and elegant style. I sbsolutely love the way you characterize Draco in all of your work, he's not perfect, nor is he evil. Excellent. :) Great work.

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Excellent one-shot. I adore the fact that Draco is in character. I've read many stories where Draco simply turns into a weak, loving mush and loses that cold exterior he's always had. Even if his exterior is mean, I've always pictured him having it in a relationship.

I really enjoyed this one-shot.

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Loved it. Absolutely fantastic. Haven't lost it at all.

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I really really enjoyed this story. It was incredibly sweet. Well done!

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well done, again! i like the struggling father VS the oh i'm gona be a dad ecstacy

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This is soo cute. I love the ending!! :) 10/10 x x x x x

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. It was my first attempt to get back in the game in a long time. Thanks!

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I thought you did a wonderful job of portraying Draco, even with Hermione I still picture him as a selfish prat. You showed him attempting to be better though and it was a very sweet story. Not rusty at all :)

Author's Response: I made Draco so horribly sweet and gentle in my other stories that I had to balance it out with something a tiny bit more true to his character. I'm happy you liked it, thanks for reading :D

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cool!
i really liked it!
i get the feeling, from this story and your others, that just maybe you like draco and hermione being together... just maybe

=]

Author's Response: I am a Draco/Hermione shipper to the end! lol JKR can disagree all she wants, but in my world they were meant for each other :D Thanks for reading!

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