i love this! it was so creative! Report Review
love your story, but you need to update more often!!! Report Review
Okm i loved it and will deffinatly keep reading!
post new chappter soon PLEASE! Report Review
I really like it!
The thought of Snape and Lily together makes me sick to my stomach! Im adore James and Lily. Im excited for your next chapter, you a fantastic writer and i absolutley ADORE ADORE ADOOORE Lovesick!
Indira Report Review
thats gay dumbledore would never make lily do that Author's Response: sorry you think so. Report Review
Very, Very good! I like it! Honestly, I really just want the part where James finds out what Lily has been doing. That will be good~Author's Response: oh yes. It should be good. I have it alll worked out Report Review
its interesting...Author's Response: thanks. interesting is always good...right? Report Review
good work. plz continue!Author's Response: i will. thanks Report Review
I can tell that this story is going to be something great. It was a great beginning and I hope you update fast! Im sorry about what happened with the old story, but Im hoping that this will be better :) 10/10Author's Response: hah me 2 Report Review
WOW This is a very good story I really enjoyed it ! And the character Lily is exactly how I imagined her! Keep up the good work! However,
**BEWARE WHAT IM ABOUT 2 WRITE IS A SPOILER!!**
If you have read DH, you will see that Snape was faithful to Dumbledore and on the good side. Unless this was the era when he was a true death eater! If so then well done!Author's Response: *BEWARE OF SPOILER* Yeah, its when he was a true death eater Report Review
As much as I loved your other story, I think I like this one more, as there is a more definate plot. I like your descriptions of the characters and the idea of Lily being a spy, very clever!
well good job and am looking forward to the next update:)
Author's Response: thanks! But I'm not sure when that update'll be Report Review
Oh wow, you completely redid this one! I like it a lot, though James is (as usual) hideous. Not your fault, of course, I just hate his character. Aw...lucky Lily, not even appreciating how many Snapefangirls (like me!) would want to be in her position. And she tries to surpress a gag *cries*. Poor Severus...maybe she will fall in love with him after all? Ahh...maybe now. Anyway, great job! I really like where this is headed.
DiandraAuthor's Response: haha thanks. I must admit I'm not much of a Snape Fan girl...although i do love his character Report Review
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