I like this story. I especially liked how you told the story from the point of view from Muggle children. The way you made Harry 'old man Potter' made it seem like Harry has become secretive like Dumbledore and somewhat reclusive like Moody.

Author's Response: Thanks so much; i'm very glad you liked it! This story holds a special place in my heart, i think partially because it's really a kind of allegory for a lot of the ways Harry Potter has impacted my life. I really liked making Harry that way, it's how i'd always seen adult Harry, even though you only really see a glimpse of it. Dumbledore and Moody are a bit of an inspiration, but i wanted to be a peace and calmness to him, so anyway . . . now i'm rambling. Thanks very much for your review. :)
Sammy Lou

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It was neat. Just a nice little one shot to read at 9:30 in the morning. It was nicely written, original, just all around well done. 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm so happy you enjoyed it and thanks for the encouragement.
Sammy Lou

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i liked this. it's interesting to read a story about muggles and their take on wizards and such. great job.

Author's Response: Thanks again!!!
Sammy Lou

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I remember someone reading this out loud at Dana's, but just remember that I haven't said anything about it.

Well, lets see... I really like the little girl. Her personality is just wonderful and I like how you portrayed Harry and the house. The word use was excellent and of course everything fit. It is just so wonderful and I know that you really don't like my short reviews but you will just have to deal with it.

Author's Response: You're so silly, and I love you for it. Thanks for the review and I don't mind that they're short I just prefer them longer. Yes, in fact Dana was the one that read it aloud at Dana's--fancy that. I'm really glad you liked it, especially since I liked writing it so much.
much love,
Sammy Lou

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awww cute! i love it. it's so well written and descriptive.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing this and so it made me sad that so few have reviewed. Thanks so much for your review and support!
much love,
Sammy Lou

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You know I love this, so I really don't have to say it... but I'll say it anyway: I love this story! Thank you so much for giving this to me for my birthday! I love you!

Author's Response: Oh, i love you too! Thanks darling and I'm glad you had a wonderful birthday.
much love,
Sammy Lou

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