OMFG! This story was great! I am so glad things are going well for everyone. I am a little worried about how things are going to turn out since Shay did go to the graduation, but I hope things for Hogwarts and for them go smoothly. You really do have a great flow with words and my attention was well kept throughout the whole story and I cannot wait to read more! On to Book 2 :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it and I hope you enjoy the rest!

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Ignore my last comment ... for some reason I thought that it was the end of the book ... I am not sure why but I didn't see that there was more chapters! But still an AMAZING story so far and I cannot wait to read all of them!

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Oh no .. this does not look good at all. I hope things start to clear up some in the next story ... and poor poor Sirius ... And poor Lily ... Oh god, why did she do that? Great story btw ... very excellently written! I cannot read to start Part 2!

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I love your writing. It keeps me interested through the whole thing! I love it. You have a great talent for writing and I cannot wait to read all of the stories! Excellent Job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy reading the rest of it!

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Wow that was awesome i love how Sirius nd Shay's parents were used. You are by far one if my favourute writers and this story is my new favourite story that involves Lily and James.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm happy you enjoy the story so much.

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WOW! wasn't expecting that but hey makes all the more interesting.
Brilliantly written :)

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

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That was the cutest proposal ever :)

Author's Response: It would be very cute...

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OMG OMG!! I'm so excited :)

Author's Response: I'm excited too!

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Oh im so excited. Im sorry for always reviewing :)

Author's Response: Don't be sorry. I greatly appreciate the reviews.

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I loved this chapter...the emotions were amazing and spot on. :)

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The ending was perfect...Perfect.. i think every girl has dremt of that :)

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The end part with Sirius and Shay was gorgeous and im love with youw riting style nd am so intrigued :)

Author's Response: Mucho gracias!

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Hilariass. I loved it. Can'tw ait to read more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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Please dont stop writing!

Author's Response: I won't! I hope you read the other installments of the story.

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it waz amazing!there arent words gud enough 2 describ it!i cant wait 2 read the 2nd & 3rd parts!i luved it & cant wait 2 read the rest basically!

Author's Response: thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it so far.

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omg...that was REALLY funny...i loved it.

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Great story!
Loved it alot, all the descriptions and emotions were perfectly written!
marauderqueen
10

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Makes me think about where I was then and where I am now. So many things are different. It's very strange.

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I never get over that ending scene haah
xxjess

Author's Response: Yes, one of my finer moments in writing.

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So mmm, I am rereading this story cause its been a while
I guess i haven't read since you edited because i can tell its been edited. (I mean that in a good way!!)

xxJess

Author's Response: Yea I hope it's better. You'll realize with your writing that sometimes when you write something you think it's the best thing in the world. Then you go back and read it after some time and realize it's complete garbage.

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Hey! you're memo at the top inspired me
and now I'm going to review
I absolutely love you're work
mind you- I've only read
29 chapters but i haven't
been able to remove myself
from my computer chair
it's just that good!
I hope you continue with this
great work!
I think I'll really enjoy this
and the next intallments

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I really do appreciate it! I'm glad you like the story and I hope that you keep on reading!

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Um.. won't they see him later if they have to do it all day?

Author's Response: uh...I think it's to early for me to understand this.

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Aha, Hakuna Matata, great philosophy. 'It's our problem free philosophy! Hakuna Matata!' I love Lion King! And I love Dumbledore. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I love Lion King too. I have the cd on rotation in my car right now.

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:D Tee Hee. God, I wish I went to Hogwarts. Best thing ever I'm sure.

Author's Response: Yea, it would be quite fun.

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AW!! I want them to hook up!!!

Author's Response: who doesn't?

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hahahhahahahahahahahahx3456787655 thats hilarious...

Author's Response: I think the numbers really emphasize how funny it is.

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