{reviewid: 2333246, reviewer: 'inky'}
16th April 2010:
yes.! wtf??? i relly don't understand and a sequel is defo required!! what happened??
xxx
ps. its AMAZING!!!
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{reviewid: 2097291, reviewer: 'vampire%20girl%201944'}
14th April 2009:
OK i love this plot and the characters but i think u need to put a little bit of depth into the character's emotions. like when emma was telling sirius about allie, make it seem like emma is truly torn up about her friends death, like put pauses in the dialogue, ya know?
I love this story by the way, but just remember what i said about depth. :D
~VAMPIRE GIRL 1944~
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{reviewid: 2095709, reviewer: 'expelliumus731'}
12th April 2009:
So, if she's alive after all, how come she has to stay in hiding and keep the fact that shes not dead a secret? Or is she really dead?
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{reviewid: 2017431, reviewer: 'I%20AM%20SO%20SIRIUS'}
26th December 2008:
OMG YESSS!!!
i was preparing myself to hate you beause you were going to kill emma (i hate it when the lead or their loved one dies) but then you didnt and i loved the twist at the end. so to sum up i love the story love the twist will love the sequel and therfore love you writing tallents!! anyways please keep writing!!
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{reviewid: 1975679, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
YES!!!
what the heck was that for???
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{reviewid: 1975675, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
um is this a dream??? it better be!
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{reviewid: 1975671, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
veeery nice. i really like it.
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{reviewid: 1975653, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
well that was a sweet chappie.
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{reviewid: 1975650, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
omg is he gonna ask her to marry him???
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{reviewid: 1975639, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
Peter already changed sides?!?
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{reviewid: 1975539, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
hey why does Cady get Remus???
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{reviewid: 1975536, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
omg what is in that letter???
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{reviewid: 1975533, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
ya that was kinda pointless.
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{reviewid: 1975532, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
very nice chappie! i like it.
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{reviewid: 1975528, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
i kinda think its moving too fast.
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{reviewid: 1975146, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
omg that is so sad!!!
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{reviewid: 1975145, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
omg what just happened???
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{reviewid: 1975144, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
they already made up??? in the same chappie?!?
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{reviewid: 1975142, reviewer: 'doglover'}
27th October 2008:
that was a really good chappie!!!
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{reviewid: 1974817, reviewer: 'doglover'}
26th October 2008:
this is a very depressing story.
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{reviewid: 1974804, reviewer: 'doglover'}
26th October 2008:
her mom died? why did you do that???
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{reviewid: 1974792, reviewer: 'doglover'}
26th October 2008:
omg that was even sadder!!!
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{reviewid: 1974783, reviewer: 'doglover'}
26th October 2008:
that was sooo sad!!!
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{reviewid: 1974735, reviewer: 'doglover'}
26th October 2008:
aaawww how sad!!! so sad!!!
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{reviewid: 1974729, reviewer: 'doglover'}
26th October 2008:
very very nice chappie.
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