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Review #1, by inky Chapter 22: So Sorry

16th April 2010:
yes.! wtf??? i relly don't understand and a sequel is defo required!! what happened??
xxx

ps. its AMAZING!!!

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Review #2, by vampire girl 1944 Sirius Ruined The Moment

14th April 2009:
OK i love this plot and the characters but i think u need to put a little bit of depth into the character's emotions. like when emma was telling sirius about allie, make it seem like emma is truly torn up about her friends death, like put pauses in the dialogue, ya know?
I love this story by the way, but just remember what i said about depth. :D

~VAMPIRE GIRL 1944~

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Review #3, by expelliumus731 Chapter 22: So Sorry

12th April 2009:
So, if she's alive after all, how come she has to stay in hiding and keep the fact that shes not dead a secret? Or is she really dead?

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Review #4, by I AM SO SIRIUS Chapter 22: So Sorry

26th December 2008:
OMG YESSS!!!
i was preparing myself to hate you beause you were going to kill emma (i hate it when the lead or their loved one dies) but then you didnt and i loved the twist at the end. so to sum up i love the story love the twist will love the sequel and therfore love you writing tallents!! anyways please keep writing!!

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Review #5, by doglover Chapter 22: So Sorry

27th October 2008:
YES!!!
what the heck was that for???

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Review #6, by doglover Chapter 21: Stood up?

27th October 2008:
um is this a dream??? it better be!

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Review #7, by doglover Chapter 20: Whatever You'd Like.

27th October 2008:
veeery nice. i really like it.

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Review #8, by doglover Chapter 19: Will You?

27th October 2008:
well that was a sweet chappie.

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Review #9, by doglover Chapter 18: And then She Realized it All

27th October 2008:
omg is he gonna ask her to marry him???

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Review #10, by doglover Chapter 17: So Alone

27th October 2008:
Peter already changed sides?!?

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Review #11, by doglover Chapter Sixteen: All Year

27th October 2008:
hey why does Cady get Remus???

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Review #12, by doglover Chapter 15: Never Lousy

27th October 2008:
omg what is in that letter???

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Review #13, by doglover Chapter 14: Chaotic

27th October 2008:
ya that was kinda pointless.

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Review #14, by doglover Chapter 13: Don't worry

27th October 2008:
very nice chappie! i like it.

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Review #15, by doglover Chapter 12: Promise?

27th October 2008:
i kinda think its moving too fast.

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Review #16, by doglover Chapter 11: Like She Was Never There

27th October 2008:
omg that is so sad!!!

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Review #17, by doglover Chapter Ten: Enough To Die

27th October 2008:
omg what just happened???

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Review #18, by doglover Chapter Nine: It was a mistake

27th October 2008:
they already made up??? in the same chappie?!?

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Review #19, by doglover Chapter 8: Do you love me?

27th October 2008:
that was a really good chappie!!!

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Review #20, by doglover Chapter Seven: Glares and Stares

26th October 2008:
this is a very depressing story.

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Review #21, by doglover Chapter Six: Surprise!

26th October 2008:
her mom died? why did you do that???

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Review #22, by doglover Chapter Five- Not Your Fault

26th October 2008:
omg that was even sadder!!!

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Review #23, by doglover Chapter Four: Her best friend

26th October 2008:
that was sooo sad!!!

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Review #24, by doglover Chapter Three: Don't ever Skip school with a Black

26th October 2008:
aaawww how sad!!! so sad!!!

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Review #25, by doglover That One Day Last Year

26th October 2008:
very very nice chappie.

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