Loved it! Great job :)Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
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I really like the story, it's cute, fluffy, funny, and a little bit angsty in parts. Whats with the "master" bit? 9/10Author's Response: Thank you, I will.
'master' as in the games some people like to play with their partners...To me, when Hermione says it there, she's trying to distract Draco from his slightly defensive statement.
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purified volodomort..interesting, but odd but its ur story. its ok , wheres the detail, description, i have no clue how Hermione's room looks, is she waring her school robes or jeens?? is it night or day? are harry and Ron looking through the crack under the door? is there a crack? are there stacks of book in Hermione's room?? DESCRIPTION! you got to paint a picture for your reader!! hook them make emotions come across. make me laugh make me cry, make me want to come back for more!!! listen to your English teacher, it helps...really it does!! I want to be twitching all day long to get home to read the next chapter! be excited to wright you next chapter!! it might come across in you writing!!!
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