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Review #1, by Princess Di St. Mungo's

28th December 2007:
That was kinda sad. It was past sad, it was heartfelt.

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Review #2, by dennisud A Surprise for Some Slytherins

7th October 2007:
Wow a gret story the only multi-chapter N/L story I've found exclusively for that pair!

PLEASE update this!


dennisud

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Review #3, by lewreadtransformer A Surprise for Some Slytherins

11th August 2007:
i like it. except for neville's little 'i can do it' moments it's not textbook at all which is very neville/luna. big fan already...keep 'em coming

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Review #4, by HogwartsMafia St. Mungo's

4th April 2007:
Hmmm interesting start. Feels a little off but I don't know why.

Author's Response: Thanks very much for the comment. I am attempting to achieve a certain degree of discomfort and awkwardness, particularly with the opening chapter. I hope that is the aspect of "off" to which you refer.
I see Neville intrinsically as a strong and compelling character who, at this point in his life, happens to have a profoundly awkward personality. With any luck the story will illuminate not only the foundations for that, but also his ability to grow beyond it.
Subsequent chapters will include some more humor, plus a bit of action and romance. I hope those components of the story will make it less somber without overly diluting the themes of growth and healing.
I hope you'll keep reading, and I look forward to your comments as the story progresses.


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