Please update soon I want to read more because the summary sounds really good. Report Review
Good so far, I'll wait for the next chapter to see how your'e doing.
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Pretty good. Some more new stuff would be nice in later chapters, though. You might try to rephrase the 4th paragraph. Maybe instead of “Ronald Weasley, always called Ron.”, you could say “Ronald Weasley, a friend of Harry’s and one of the Trio, is known as Ron by nearly everyone.” Then you could restructure the following sentences a little for that. You should use a spellecheck, there's several available online if you don't have word. There were some simple mistakes that could be easily corrected (extremly, homeade). Good job, and I look forward to the next chapter! Report Review
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