That was sweet, and hilarious at the same time

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hehe! that was way cute and funny, at the same time. amazing how that happens isn't it?

well, i loved.. it! tons! keep writing, you have a great style :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll definitely keep writing. :)

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That was great! I love how you made it a sweet romantic story but at the same time I was able to laugh every other minute at the hilarity of it all! Great Job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was hoping readers would at least get a bit of a chuckle out of it. :)

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lmao, the arse part had me bursting out laughing, Fred and George are too much, and Harry's comments made me laugh, everything was so funny and cute! The perfect combination of humor, fluff, cuteness. everything you need for a good fluffy one shot lol. You write the characters extremely well. This story is SO good. I loved it. 10-10!

Author's Response: Eeps, I'm very flattered at your praise! Thank you for leaving such a kind review!

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Lol... well done! :) Just the right mix of humor and romance.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is exactly what I was trying to achieve!

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I love it! Very original. I enjoyed the story immensely. You kept it very well organized, and detailed while still understandable. You also do a good job of keeping true to the characters as JK portrays them. You may want to try to lengthen your paragraphs a bit more than a sentence, but you made it work for you. Good job, and keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will take your advice into consideration, although it's more of a stylistic choice for me. I use shorter paragraphs when writing dialogue-driven stories, so as to move the action forward. I prefer longer paragraphs when writing introspective, lyrical pieces. Thank you for the concrit though--I love concrit!

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This is so amazing! And very original and detailed! You've captured the characterizations very well. I loved the part about his arse being on fire, it was hilarious. ^_^ If you ever want a banner, just feel free to email me at brit_shs_2010@hotmail.com. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you for such a detailed review! I'll definitely keep your offer in mind, though I'm not much of a flashy story banner person. :)

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