Wow, that was really, really good. I love how it was told in Neville's POV, it just made the story that much more interesting. Your ideas were very original, and I like how you kind of left it open for the reader to determine what happened. The last paragraph was my favorite part, though; the last line was perfect. Way to go!

Author's Response: You know something? I love you right now. You're the first person to leave me a review in weeks. Give me a story idea or something you'd just like to read and I will write it for you by the next day. Seriously, your review is appreciated. If only all my readers were like you.

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Hey, that was an amazing story. I wanted to cry.

Okay so here is what I have to say:
1. This is just my opinon, but I think that there is a little too much space between the paragraphs.
2. I liked how Neville was telling the story.

10/10 it was amazing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I really can't tell you how good it feels that my work affected you like that. Because you're my first reviewer (I think) and you gave me such amazing feedback, I am going to give you a gift. Tell me some story or idea that you would like to see in writing and I will do my best to make you laugh, cry, or whatever else with it. Again, thanks alot. Means the world to be appreciated, you know.

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That was really good. I liek how it was Neville telling the story, and I think it's sad how they all had to defeat Voldmort. Very sad, but a great story nonetheless.

Author's Response: Thanks alot my rather contradictory friend. Yeah, the great but sad thing, that's the only review I ever get. If you want to read my only other (published) work, go to veritaserum.com and search for A Last Day under James Michael Caine. I lost count of the great but sad reviews. (of course I'm terrible at math...) I would edit the story, it's got lots of rough edges, but I kinda lost my password, so oh well. But anyway, I'm really glad you like my stuff, and if you decide to read the other one I hope you enjoy it too.

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I LOVE YOUR STORY.IT'S GREAT!1

Author's Response: Haha, I LOVE YOUR ENTHUSIASM. IT'S GREAT!! Thanks for the review, gave me a smile and a laugh.

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