Reading Reviews for The Ball
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Review #1, by looney_luna Chapter 2

29th January 2008:
ROCK ON HANNAH!!! WOOT WOOT!!! haha love it yet it feels rushed or something

Author's Response: Thank you desi but you know how I write. it's always rushed! you better update soon!

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Review #2, by dark-lord--happy-pants Chapter 2

21st August 2007:
get that next chap up QUICKLY! i DON'T like waiting.
just kiddin'
this is good, u should SO keep writing it!

Author's Response: I'm trying to update but with school starting on Friday and being away for part of the summer it's hard to think sometimes.

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Review #3, by Hypogriff5566 Chapter 2

6th June 2007:
I really hope that you make Ginny and Harry an item at some point. It was a good chapter. I have just one question: where does 'The Ball' come in? Very good so far. Write more soon! I love it!

Author's Response: The Ball comes in, in the next chapter

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Review #4, by Hypogriff5566 'Stuff It'

6th June 2007:
Great! I like Trelawny's appearing out of nowhere. Needs to be edited a tiny bit more, though. Overall, very nice. Please write more! I like reading your peices!

Author's Response: thanks for the positive review... those are always appreciated. It may end up happening that this story is abandoned though because I'm not sure where to go with it.

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Review #5, by maurader fan Chapter 2

31st May 2007:
I love it! How do you make/insert a banner? Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanxx again. I have absolutely no idea how to make a banner. But to insert it, click edit summary, and then you will find on the far right an icon, click on it, and then put your banner on it.

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Review #6, by GenieAmour Chapter 2

26th May 2007:
74 times ?!?! lol poor ginny ... haha!!

Author's Response: Yeah Ginny is going to get it hare from Fred and George in Chapter three.....Also 74 is just a completly random number that I asked my friend for.

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Review #7, by GenieAmour 'Stuff It'

26th May 2007:
hey i really liked it seriously!!! "50 points to Gryffindor"
"the gargoyle saw the scar" haha ... lol that was funny!!

Author's Response: I'm sorry to say that it was 50 points from Gryffindor. But the Gargoyle really just came to me out of nowhere.
Thanks for the Review!

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Review #8, by Lion or Serpent Chapter 2

18th April 2007:
Great Story!!! You could use some spelling help

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review #9, by FatUmbridge Chapter 2

4th April 2007:
Hehehehe. I actualy know who you are.
Good story, i thibnk its a little short. ANd you need professional help with commas.

I liked the story. I think i already said that...

Keep writing...

Author's Response: And I'm pretty sure I know who you are.....Spellin Gerrors.....Anywho thanks for the good comment....Many people have said that I need help with commas......Interesting.

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Review #10, by Wizardwannabe Chapter 2

2nd April 2007:
Well i like the story but you spelled grammar wrong like five times and you spelled cork wrong! LOL I caught ya!

Author's Response: If you are at school today There will be a murder in the social studies room!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review #11, by dracoismyferretnotyours Chapter 2

31st March 2007:
Interesting concept. Definatly (SOO sorry about my spelling, please ignore it I am just awful with it) a new idea. Constructive critisism (take it as that and nothing more, no intentional insults): love the chapters, but because they are on the shorter side they leave you hanging. I think if you just expand the details just slightly, it will make it a TON better, and let people see where you are going with this and make it easier to understand. I hope that you will update soon, because I am very VERY interested to see where this goes from here. Keep it up! ^.^

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for the review! You say exactly what my english teacher says in that I try to put as little detail as possible in my writing. Thanks for reading!

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Review #12, by HogwartsChikk22 Chapter 2

23rd March 2007:
i thought it was great!! keep writing and update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review I was kind of worried that it would be bad because I was writing it during a test and I was really tired.

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Review #13, by me 'Stuff It'

21st March 2007:
I think that it was actually pretty good. I especially liked the part about the perfume :)!!! Overall, it was a very nice story! :)!!!:)!!!:)!!!:)!!!:)!!! I have never read Harry Potter though so some of it was difficult to understand...but like I've said, I still liked it!

Author's Response: The part with Harry being sufficated by the perfume was really easy because I was just reading the 5th book and was talking about how Trelawney always wore too much perfume. Thanks for the review!!!

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Review #14, by Dragon Girl 'Stuff It'

14th March 2007:
God malfoy can be a prat but even hermione has got to admit that boy is hot

Author's Response: you have an extremely good point there! And thank you sooooo much for giving me a review I was begining to think that people hated my story!

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Review #15, by Wizardwannabe 'Stuff It'

13th March 2007:
Uh huh you need to make your chapters longer and I love that I can say this! TYPOS!! Burn oh burn oh burn! professor burn burn brun he he

Author's Response: Three things to say to you:
A)don't say burn so much
B)I dont get it...wait I always say that
just for you

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