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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by lunylovegoodlover

7th February 2010:

I loved this!

10/10

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm very glad that you liked it!

~AshHa~

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Review #2, by lalalalalalacritic

A Dream Come True

22nd June 2009:

Aren't they a bit young- they r only in 7th year! And they just started going out! And why does he call her woman? And there are some spelling mistakes! And it was 2 soppy and corny! ANd other than that-

GREAT!

Author's Response: Well, in the magical world, seventeen is eighteen to us - adulthood. They are old enough to be married. Anyway, Thanks for the review!

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Review #3, by WriterPlatinum

A Dream Come True

20th June 2009:

Very corny! Haha!

A little short, but that's alright - good things come in small packages. I think the language was brilliant. It's the first romantic story I've actually been able to read whole - and I read it pretty fast.

Nice description, nice everything! Great work.

Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad you liked it so much! I hope you find more romantic stories you can read-check out Redheads_4ever and Redheads_sis. Thanks for the review!!

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Review #4, by Harry and Ginny

A Dream Come True

18th June 2009:

great fic u have here however u wrote "she dispised it" when it should be "she despised it" just a little change and i hope i could help. keep up the good work please.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Oopsies! Thanks for the editing help!

AshHa

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