I loved this!
10/10Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm very glad that you liked it!
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Aren't they a bit young- they r only in 7th year! And they just started going out! And why does he call her woman? And there are some spelling mistakes! And it was 2 soppy and corny! ANd other than that-
GREAT!Author's Response: Well, in the magical world, seventeen is eighteen to us - adulthood. They are old enough to be married. Anyway, Thanks for the review! Report Review
Very corny! Haha!
A little short, but that's alright - good things come in small packages. I think the language was brilliant. It's the first romantic story I've actually been able to read whole - and I read it pretty fast.
Nice description, nice everything! Great work.Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad you liked it so much! I hope you find more romantic stories you can read-check out Redheads_4ever and Redheads_sis. Thanks for the review!! Report Review
great fic u have here however u wrote "she dispised it" when it should be "she despised it" just a little change and i hope i could help. keep up the good work please.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review. Oopsies! Thanks for the editing help!
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