Just proofread it. Plot is good. Report Review
A few spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing horrible. Maybe go through it a little better next time, but other than that, well written and good, just work on the mechanics a bit, it shows carlessness to allow spelling and grammar mistakes through.Author's Response: Thank you for your review. It is my first fan fiction . I did get a friend to read through my first draft . We must have missed one or two mistakes. I have dyslexia so you should have see it before. Thank you for your review . I shall read through it again . Christiana Report Review
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