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Review #1, by Pottergirl17 Lifeless

12th April 2007:
You never really followed your summery. Even though I know that you don't want to change the story too much, I feel that you kind of have to to make the story click. I would lengthen the plot if I were you, and describe a little bit of what had happened before, and more of what happened after he slipped into the coma. Just a suggestion, but otherwise it was a good read.

Author's Response: erm, thanks. I'll keep that in mind next time. and thanks again :)

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Review #2, by PotterBlake Lifeless

20th March 2007:
You didn't follow the summary, but it was good.


Author's Response: erm, thanks.

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Review #3, by jayde_evans Lifeless

5th March 2007:
not bad but who i s ayden???

Author's Response: ahh, crap. sorry 'bout that. its supposed to be Harry. In the original story I wrote for school his name was Ayden >_<

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