{reviewid: 2090788, reviewer: 'girly1393'}
6th April 2009:
Sweet. Simple. Painful and broken, but willing to heal. I like that. I think it's beautiful.
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{reviewid: 1599863, reviewer: 'ginny_weasley_54'}
27th August 2007:
wow. i love. one of the best james/lily storys. i just love it.
Author's Response: Eeeee thank you! :]
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{reviewid: 1555750, reviewer: 'JimJams'}
5th August 2007:
awww this was so sweet :) i wonder what he did to make her angry in the first place tho?
xxx
Author's Response: Yeah, I should've put that in. It's really not important though. Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 1550984, reviewer: 'SnitchSnatcher'}
3rd August 2007:
Aw, this was so cute! I really enjoyed it, nicely done. And I love that Hellogoodbye song and I thought that it fit perfectly. When that one tear rolled down James's face, I swore I could feel my heart breaking.
Author's Response: Aww I'm glad it had that effect on you. I thought it fit nicely too, thanks.
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{reviewid: 1499918, reviewer: 'Rettopyrrah'}
6th July 2007:
Oh my word
Merlin! I love it, your stories are so amazing. I usually don't read song fics
[♥] Rettopyrrah [♥]
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :]]]
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{reviewid: 1459388, reviewer: 'Lillikins'}
12th June 2007:
I LOVED IT.ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT lol,... I"m sorry for those capitals...hahaha you portrayed Lily and James just how i imagined them to be...that was great!
Author's Response: I'M GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT SO MUCH! haha but seriously, thanks :]
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{reviewid: 1438413, reviewer: 'dianap00'}
29th May 2007:
feels short. cute. i like the gist of it. =) well done.
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't want to drag it out too long and make it really boring. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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{reviewid: 1436887, reviewer: 'Hermione%20Potter452'}
28th May 2007:
aww! that was really good. man, you've GOT to write more stories. you're such a good writer! 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks!! :] I'll definitely write more once I'm done w/ all of my finals.
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{reviewid: 1425176, reviewer: 'Sirius%20Lee%20Brilliant'}
20th May 2007:
I LOVED IT!
God, I wish I could write like you!
Author's Response: Oh my! Thank you so much! Oh and I'm digging your penname :]
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{reviewid: 1423067, reviewer: 'lilypotter21'}
19th May 2007:
thats soo adorable =]
Author's Response: Yaaay thanks!
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{reviewid: 1419120, reviewer: 'amna1992'}
16th May 2007:
Hey that was a good story!! I love james/Lily
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{reviewid: 1419119, reviewer: 'amna1992'}
16th May 2007:
Hey that was a good story!! I love james/Lily
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah me too, they're my favorite :]
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{reviewid: 1403236, reviewer: 'Sam'}
2nd May 2007:
Superb!!! It was just so cute!!! One shots are superb and this one was really really good! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Oh, glad you liked it so much! :]]]]]
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{reviewid: 1398851, reviewer: 'Firenze%20Fan'}
28th April 2007:
what happened to make them mad at each other? but good story.
Author's Response: That's what everyone is asking. I didn't have something definite in mind; I suppose I should've written something. Sorry, but thanks for reviewing.
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{reviewid: 1372607, reviewer: 'lilyflower1022'}
9th April 2007:
awww! that is SO cute! i absolutly loved it!
10/10
Author's Response: haha yaay! Thanks :]
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{reviewid: 1362612, reviewer: 'iviera_vangelisti'}
3rd April 2007:
i think it's completely adorable. i actually read this before and forgot to review, oh and if the other sotry could be updated that would utter brilliant. thanks.
you're amazing.
Author's Response: flksdjfldsj
Thank you so much for your kind words and I cannot say how sorry I am for not updating that other one. I'm just having the hardest time ending it. I've written something, but it's kind of short, so I don't know if you guys would like it... :/
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{reviewid: 1344938, reviewer: 'innocent%20lily'}
17th March 2007:
Omg! I love that song!
I think the story fit the song pretty well.
Keep up the great writing!!
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much! :]
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{reviewid: 1340691, reviewer: 'Pigs_and_Penguins'}
14th March 2007:
8/10, this was really cute, and I abosultely love the song, But it just feels like you left a lot out, like why was James mad at Lily? Did he finally give in and somewhat get over her? Other than that, I think it was really cute!
xoxo, Jessie.
PS, to get rid of the empty lines, click the little clipboard on the left, instead of just paste-ing. =)
Author's Response: Ahhh! Thanks so much for telling me how to do that! Ok, I'll go back and edit that part. I'll send it in again to be revalidated. Thanks for teh review!
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{reviewid: 1340179, reviewer: 'ron_hearts_hermione'}
14th March 2007:
A few things. One, I hate when people have overly spaced stories. Might wanna trim it down a bit. Two, I think you should put what happened to get them like this, because I was a bit confused. And three, I didn't really think the ending was very fitting. Might want to change it up a little bit. Good story line, though :]]
Author's Response: Ya I hate that too, but I couldn't seem to be able to change any of the spacing on it. I was thinking about changing that, so maybe I will. Thanks for the review.
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{reviewid: 1339159, reviewer: 'Proud%20Hufflepuff'}
13th March 2007:
That's awesome! I loved it, nothing else I can say!
Author's Response: haha hey, I'll take that! Thanks!
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{reviewid: 1338942, reviewer: 'Dragonchaserchick'}
13th March 2007:
That was great! I'm still a tad bit miffed about the other story not being updated yet. I have the patience of a five year old waiting for a ice cream cone on a hot summers day. Still great song fic!
Author's Response: haha No, I definitely should've had that other story updated. I'm just having a huge writers block. Please forgive me! I hope this helped to tie you over a bit. I'm glad you liked it. :]
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{reviewid: 1338660, reviewer: 'wicKeDwitch1316'}
12th March 2007:
ohhh. I listened to the song while i read it and it worked so perfectly. the song is the perfect mixture of happiness and melancholy, just like the story. well done!
Author's Response: Thanks, I thought so too. I'm glad at least someone listened to it while reading it! :]
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{reviewid: 1338657, reviewer: 'squib26'}
12th March 2007:
FANTASTIC! best one-shot iv read yet. nice banner as well. im looking forward to seeing you wrap up your other story too, but it shouldn't be hard. you definitely got mad skillz. keep it up.
Author's Response: Wow! I'm so honored! Thanks so much for all your kind words. I'll try to get the other story up ;]
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{reviewid: 1338609, reviewer: 'hey%21'}
12th March 2007:
really really good!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks!
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{reviewid: 1338606, reviewer: 'tonks_3243'}
12th March 2007:
I thought this was adorable. =] And I love the song! I was going to make a fanfic based off this song. Heheh. Good job.
Author's Response: Ya this has to be one of my favorite songs out there. It's not that hard to write a fanfic to this either. Thanks! :]
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