{reviewid: 1882101, reviewer: 'dramaqueen728'}
30th March 2008:
this story made me giggle :]
this was c.u.t.e. & captured all the characters perfectly!
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{reviewid: 1842043, reviewer: 'MissJessx3'}
23rd February 2008:
YOU HAVE OUT-DONE YOURSELF YET AGAIN! Your stories just get better and better!! You have no idea how much i LOVED it when the character would say the words to the song! That was hilarious/brilliant! 10/10 deffinately. Keep up the good writing!
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{reviewid: 1833209, reviewer: 'Marauderess'}
16th February 2008:
HA! That a was cute fic i like how you worked the lyrics into the fic instead of putting them in their own little seperate paragraph like most authors. It's a refreshing twist on song fics. keep up the good work. ;P
P.S. Before he cheats: one of the BEST SONGS EVER!
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{reviewid: 1533663, reviewer: 'Oliver'}
25th July 2007:
Dude! Is that Matt the School Pervert? o.O Or was this before that silly little character was thought up? I can't remember. =]
Always funny! I wonder what James will do to Sirius? The mind reels. =]
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{reviewid: 1455840, reviewer: 'Llama%20lady%20Lily'}
9th June 2007:
hahaha deliciously evil.
Love it
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{reviewid: 1444652, reviewer: 'Lightning'}
2nd June 2007:
I WOULD KILL SIRIUS! I mean, how could he do that to them? Other then that, it was great.
Author's Response: lol, honest mistake =] besides we always knew sirius was a bit...strange.
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{reviewid: 1409111, reviewer: 'lveiswierd123'}
7th May 2007:
lol thats a good story..good idea! 8)
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{reviewid: 1408532, reviewer: 'mischiefmanaged'}
6th May 2007:
Great story! It was very hilarious. I liked how you used the song lyrics as some of the character dialogue. And shame on Sirius for planting that idea in Lily's head, but hey, it's what he does! 9/10
-mischiefmanaged
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{reviewid: 1386209, reviewer: 'EViLEiSMAPURPLEPIXIES32'}
19th April 2007:
niceee :]]
Author's Response: thanksss
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{reviewid: 1372235, reviewer: 'dennisnmike'}
9th April 2007:
God . . . Sirius is a jerk . . . lol, but we all love him anyways
Author's Response: haha, I know right...strange world...
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{reviewid: 1371540, reviewer: 'Childish_Fairy'}
9th April 2007:
hahaha
i love that song
i love this story
Author's Response: thanks =]
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{reviewid: 1360976, reviewer: 'addictedtohp'}
31st March 2007:
Lol, loooved it! Ahhaha, so funny, good job! xx addi.
Author's Response: lol thank you!
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{reviewid: 1351210, reviewer: 'thediarywithin'}
22nd March 2007:
Lol, Love how Sirius encluded some thoughts into it. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: =] thank you!
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{reviewid: 1345647, reviewer: '%26hearts%3B%20made%20of%20sound.'}
18th March 2007:
bahaha gold. classic "my bad" >runs off
Author's Response: lol, thanks[:
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{reviewid: 1345522, reviewer: 'me_thehplvr'}
18th March 2007:
hahahahahahaha! *rolls on ground laughing* I love it!
Author's Response: LOL. I'm happy then =]
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{reviewid: 1345308, reviewer: 'Boots'}
17th March 2007:
Creative, definitely. Could still use some work, but I'm impressed. Keep writing. This story deserves a sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks=] sequal? i'll think about it...
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{reviewid: 1339941, reviewer: 'someone'}
13th March 2007:
LMFAO Sirius is hilarious...
Author's Response: lmao. haha thank you!!!
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{reviewid: 1339630, reviewer: 'ginny_vs_phlegm'}
13th March 2007:
omg, *shakes her head* what is Sirius thinking?! good story, keep it coming!
Author's Response: =]. exactly...he wasn't thinking;]
thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1334075, reviewer: 'lizzieJ02'}
8th March 2007:
I actually liked this. I was never a country music fan until Carrie came along. Anyway, I thought it was very creative and funny.
Author's Response: Haha, [:
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{reviewid: 1333954, reviewer: 'green_eyed_flower'}
8th March 2007:
hahaha that was funny i think u should make like a squel or something! anyways it was a good story! 8/10 ~Lily
Author's Response: =] thanks, i'll think about it.
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{reviewid: 1333791, reviewer: 'Silver%20Rose%20Petals'}
8th March 2007:
Hahaha, I loved it, I especialy love the part where Sirius says my bad, as if wasn't that bad.
Author's Response: Hehee....[:
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{reviewid: 1333689, reviewer: 'JamesLilyHarry'}
8th March 2007:
hehheh, pretty good. But instead of putting the words of the song in people's quotes, I would put it like in its own little thing.
example:
'Right now,
He's probobly slow-dancing with a beach blonde tramp
And she's probobly gettn' frisky.'
Anyway, it's just a suggestion. It was creative that u had the characters say the lyrics. Never come across one set up like that.
~JLH~
PS- I love that song. It's on my iPod.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and for the advice. i've never done a songfic before...so i wasn't exactly clear. =]
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{reviewid: 1333615, reviewer: 'Moony'}
8th March 2007:
welldone it's gr8. he he should have listened 2 Remus.
Author's Response: =] thank you!
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{reviewid: 1333614, reviewer: 'seeker4u'}
8th March 2007:
okay it is good but you screwed up the lyrics a bit
Author's Response: haha, yeah but i figured james doesn't have a car...so i had to use his broom. =/ and then i'll admitt i'm not a big carrie fan..
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{reviewid: 1333437, reviewer: 'elizabeth'}
8th March 2007:
hahaha, that was cute. i love that song. this is prolly the most original songfic ive read. you did it in a very unique way. i liked it!
Author's Response: Thanks[=
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