{reviewid: 2504910, reviewer: 'WeasleyGirl03'}
8th April 2011:
I really loved the idea about the seperate school!! V original! I wish I'd thought of it lol. Will your next chapters be longer though? :)
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{reviewid: 2504907, reviewer: 'WeasleyGirl03'}
8th April 2011:
Boo it's a shame this chapter was so short, I really enjoyed it, and it was a good starting point :)
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{reviewid: 1847886, reviewer: 'jelly%20nicole'}
29th February 2008:
i really like the story so far! it has geat potential! write more soon! =)
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{reviewid: 1793726, reviewer: 'Peeves%20the%20Poltergeist'}
16th January 2008:
Even better one! Keep it up!
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{reviewid: 1793704, reviewer: 'Peeves%20the%20Poltergeist'}
16th January 2008:
Fine chapter. Well written.
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{reviewid: 1756631, reviewer: 'Firenze%20Fan'}
17th December 2007:
Nice second chapter, we get to know Frankie a little better. But still, where's Peter? He was one of the Marauders, too!
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{reviewid: 1756624, reviewer: 'Firenze%20Fan'}
17th December 2007:
First of all, what happened to Peter? And second of all, why all the spaces at the end? Hopefully your story will make more sense to me soon, since that was quite a short chapter. Good luck!
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{reviewid: 1697661, reviewer: 'Lily%204%20James'}
4th November 2007:
No...
Review quickly... I need to know what happens lol
I'm also writing a Sirius/OC and seeing as your obv. a talented writer (hehe I'm a suck up) maybe you could give me some advice??
Anyways keep writing this is 10/10
Xx
Btw I love the whole black n white thing
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{reviewid: 1663436, reviewer: 'dalsibaby'}
10th October 2007:
gr8 story. u better keep on writing!
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{reviewid: 1636728, reviewer: 'luminary'}
19th September 2007:
Great second chapter =D
I really liked the part about Ravenclaw's School For Witches, it's very original and makes a lot of sense. Yay Lily! Hopefully she'll become friends with Frankie xD
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{reviewid: 1636718, reviewer: 'luminary'}
19th September 2007:
An interesting start, I didn't expect Sirius to ignore Frankie! I will be following the story ;)
9/10
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{reviewid: 1562966, reviewer: 'rdheyes'}
9th August 2007:
hey im loving this. keep up the good work. i want to read more!!
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{reviewid: 1405429, reviewer: 'asian'}
4th May 2007:
Why is Sirius so mean to Frankie? Is it just because she's new?
Anyway I really like this story! Please update soon!!!
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{reviewid: 1388650, reviewer: 'chocolatewriter'}
21st April 2007:
Dear Me,
I like your story... alot! One of my favorites! Kool bean!
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{reviewid: 1387783, reviewer: 'House'}
21st April 2007:
I really would like to read more of your story, it's really good :)
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{reviewid: 1357561, reviewer: 'Fanta_Faerie'}
28th March 2007:
nice...seems interesting.i like the way you portrayed everyone...much better than most people can do. Good job, and update!
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{reviewid: 1357206, reviewer: 'Reading%20Fool'}
28th March 2007:
Very good chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Until then.
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{reviewid: 1357196, reviewer: 'Reading%20Fool'}
28th March 2007:
Hmm? I am liking it so far.
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{reviewid: 1357089, reviewer: 'anni'}
28th March 2007:
haha i love it that shes not obsessed with sirius.. but i do hope he realises she's a good catch and they get togther!!? update asap so i can see what hapens next
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{reviewid: 1357060, reviewer: 'Ballet%20Dancer'}
28th March 2007:
Brilliant!
I love it
haha Lily sounds so enthusiastic!
UPDATE
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{reviewid: 1342525, reviewer: 'Ultimawand'}
15th March 2007:
It was good!! 9/10! Please continue to write the story!
Author's Response: wow! 9/10?! thanks so much! :)
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{reviewid: 1332795, reviewer: 'Peaceful%20Nightmare'}
7th March 2007:
Aww poor Frankie. I'd be her friend. Cool start by the way.
Author's Response: ...and this is only the beginning! thanks for your comment. :)
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