OMG! love this so much! please update soon! ~Gigi~Author's Response: [squee] Thank you sooo much!! I'm glad you like it! I'm off to update it right now, actually. :P
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yes that is four and i love this storyAuthor's Response: Awesome. Glad you like it. Stay tuned for the next update :D Report Review
Hey honey! So, this looks like it's going to be a good story! Anyway, it might take me a while to get through it, but I will! (I've got three honors classes, ballet rehersals three times a week, and choir so... yeah. But I will finish it!)
Anyway, the beginning looks good, but somewhere you put 'reoccuring'. I think the word you're searching for is 'recurring'.
When she's ordering coffee, you might not want to put venti, because they didn't have starbucks in the 1970's. I don't think they had skater shoes either. And a chocolate croissant?! How did you know my favorite pastry. ;]
You've captured the spirit of Sirius Black perfectly. XD I LOVE IT! -squee-
Lovely job so far, I'll be reading the 2nd chapter... eventually. =]
-- AbbeyAuthor's Response: I think this is one of the longest reviews I've ever gotten.
And I love it.
Oo. They didn't have Starbucks in the 1970's? How did they LIVE? :P And no skater shoes? Well maybe I'll change that to converse [because I know they had those, my mum says they were really cheap and look almost like they do now.]
Chocolate croissants are my favourite pastry too. They're so flaky and... chocolatey.
I'm really glad you like it!! And thanks so very very much for reviewing [and reading]
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great chapter! i cant believe she actually said yes to him! i cant wait for the next chapterAuthor's Response: :P I couldn't believe she said yes either, even if it IS my story. I'll post the next chapter ASAP, but the queue is like... on hold or w/e so yeah. Thanks for reading AND reviewing! Report Review
not bad. its intersting, please continue quickly!Author's Response: Thanks. Like I said, I'm writing it on Quizilla, and I've published 5 chapters of it on there, so I can just copy-paste it onto this site. But I think I'm going to update the other story first. Although, that might take a while. been having writers block AND it's march break for me, so i'm gunna take a bit of a break. Thanks! Report Review
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