I love your writing style! It reminds me of "catcher in the rye."
Lovely story and I liked how Draco "talked" to the reader so openly as if he were talking to a friend. It also kind of reminds me of Forrest Gump :)Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much for your review. And it's always nice to be compared to other works of fiction (especially in a positive way). =] Report Review
I love this story. Its so well written!
I think my favorite thing about the piece is that there is no dialogue (save for the last two bits at the end) and I was still finding myself glued to the computer screen. Very rarely can I read through an entire story where there is no dialogue. But this was WONDERFUL!!!
keep up the great writing!
slytherinAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you. I'm glad I could keep you glued even though it wasn't your normal type of story. I must be doing something right! Report Review
HAHAHA! This was just- great :) I loved it. So adorable.
Shelby WealseyAuthor's Response: Thank you so much. It's always nice to get a lovely review! Report Review
ahhh ramblings ramblings ramblings.
haha.Author's Response: I love all your reviews! Report Review
I think it's hilarious ... It's great.Author's Response: :)))) Report Review
Hahahaha! I loved it! It's great reading a story from Draco's perspective, he's such an amazing character. :] Anyways, good job, I enjoyed reading it.Author's Response: Awww, Thanks hun. Report Review
LMAO i loved this, it was awesome to get into Draco's thoughtsAuthor's Response: heehee. Well, thanks sweetheat. Report Review
Nicely Done! Snark with just enough teenage boy!Author's Response: Hahahaha. thanks. Report Review
too cute. i love it.Author's Response: YIPPEE! Report Review
This chapter made me laugh and smile more than i can remember doing in a very long time. You are a great writer and I greatly encourage you to continue with this story because in my opinion it is really getting good! 10/10Author's Response: Well, first of all let me say that i love your penname. lol. And seocndly, thank you very much. Unfortunately, I tend not to write sequals, but look out for my other works! Report Review
this is really funny. I like.Author's Response: Merci Boucoup. Report Review
lol I love draco he is bloody awsome you capture what i think goes on in that head of sexy platinum blonde hair perfectly:)Author's Response: Ah, a fellow Draco lover. I salute you. Report Review
Nice, I wonder if thats really what guys think about when you're makin out with them? Oh yeah, tom Felton IS dead sexy(I just googled who he was, i don't keep up with thier real names). Is there a sequal? I'm off to look if there is one, and very good job on this one. Tottaly a 10/10!!!
~*jenni*~Author's Response: Well, Jenni, I'm not exactly sure on the whole making out thing, but that's what I imagine happens. lol. Thank you darling! Report Review
wow that was really excellent! i hope u make a sequel!
even if u don't, its still fab!10/10!
xoxo~loloAuthor's Response: Well aren't you sweet? I'm very happy you enjoyed youself. Report Review
lol i like seeing what Draco is thinking in his head! he is funny - well that's how you've made him! lol emma :)Author's Response: Emma,
Thank you mucho for your splendifferous review. It made me smile. :) Report Review
LMAO! "Man, I do sound like a woman." that was funny. great story! 10/10 loved all the feeling. no.. ron died! oh well. lol great work!Author's Response: I know i didn't want Ron to die either, but it was the only way it could work. Glad you liked it! Report Review
ok. ok. i know i've been reading ALL ur draco/hermione oneshots and reviewingthem all, but i love them!! you're really talented, and i hope u dontmind me umm.. reviewing them!
ok, lol. this was super! yes, draco is undeniably sweet! and gorgeous in this! aww. (i sound corny dont i?) ahwell. i love dramione! thye're the best pairing IN THE WORLD! incase u like another pairing thats just myown opinion! and i really really really love ur dramiones! DM+HG= forever! oh.. sorry. im having my own "obnoxious ramblings" here!
but 10 stars for this! 'tomfeltonisdeadsexy' (a.k.a you) are such a fantastic dramione auhtor! thanks (sorry this is so random and longg.) :DAuthor's Response: Hahahha I love your reviews, they make me overjoyed! Thank you for being such a positive input on my work, it means a lot to me! I heart you! Report Review
OOH!! Loved it! I especially liked the ending. Keep writing! :7)Author's Response: Oh thank you thank you! Report Review
THAT WAS WICKED! I loved this story. It was really well done, and i didnt get bored. See i'm more of a dialog person, I like when the people are chatting and that. However this was so well done that i was totaly into it, I really loved Draco the was you have depicted him, Very coolness Loved it,
Keep up the Great work
~ Keira-LeeAuthor's Response: You are very coolness for giving me such a great review! I loved it! Read more of my stories please! Thanks! Report Review
Ron is dead. Oh Gosh.
And Lucius too. Well, I'm not that sorry for him. Don't think that I am a heartless, evil bitch, but he deserved it. Right?
"I knew that one day I would just get tired of the hormones building up inside of me whenever I’d see her, and I’d just go for it.", “Hermione, I like you.” - couldn't have written it better.
Gosh, I absolutely LOVE this story. You should be rated 100, not 10.
Please keep on.
The LadyAuthor's Response: you are so good to me! Thank you darling! I read all of your reviews with a smile on my face! Report Review
aaahhh how sweet of him to do that for herAuthor's Response: Thank you love! Report Review
Hahaha it made me laugh and smile and made a rather boring day fantastic! Keep up the fantastic writing :].
LMWAuthor's Response: Well, I'm glad I could provide some fun! Thank you for everything! Report Review
Loved it. Hilarious, random and definately rambling. Ending sentence was a classic.
"Okay, so maybe there is a little hope in this world for me with my twisted and endless thoughts. Maybe this could lead to something more than just tonight. But now I can at least be happy with saying that I’ve been able to snag the eluding girl of my dreams.
Man, I do sound like a woman."
That was the cherry on top of the cake.
Author's Response: Lol, I'm very glad you enjoyed it becuase I certainly loved writing it! I loved the ending, if I do say so myself too! Report Review
I thought this was very cute, and fun to read, great job! 10/10Author's Response: Danka! Report Review
Hilarious! You are simply awesome!Author's Response: Aww, thank you! *Does a happy dance* I'm awesome! Report Review
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