Loved it except the very last part because I got all teary eyed. ;)

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Love Love Love! I love how you show the gradual relationship. I love how you see that they were perfect for each other. I love the end (even if it does make me sad.) 9/10

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that seems like the kind of person molly would be at school. i liked it. it was well written.
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I was really diggin' it. But it was missing their little quirks. Arthur could have been tinkering with a VCR or something instead of reading a book (not that it would work at Hogwarts, just the first thing I saw). Molly wasn't really her fiesty self either. She reminded me more of Carmen from the Traveling Pants series. I enjoyed the story, though the ending was a little weak. Still a spectacular story. Cheers.

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A few times when Molly's describing her past boyfriends, you say "prefect" instead of "perfect". Just pointing that out. Just read through it, you'll find little typos. Any way, this was really, really, good. The only part I'm not like absolutely obsessed with, was the proposing, I just think it should be a little harder to convince her, or something. :]] I give you an eight. :]]

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OMG!!! That ending was so... I just hope Arthur doesn't die. There should be more Molly/Arthur stories around- congrats on such a good one!

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Ow, painful ending.

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Aww, that is so sad! But it was fantastic! I can't wait to read more of your writing!

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