Rather fluffy and sweet, but a very enjoyable and short read. Definitely brought a smile to face. Though it'd have been better if you had used Ron and Hermione, instead of Alison and Jordon, in the end. The ending could've been better. Nonetheless, good work! I'll definitely be reading more of your stories :)

Author's Response: thank you! (: i couldn't exactly use ron and hermione for the ending, because i wanted the ending to be open yet still imply what would happen - hence the parallel with alison and jordan.
thank you for the review! (:


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that was reallly good.10/10

Author's Response: thank you! (:


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I liked it, and you were right her art work is beautiful!

Author's Response: thank you! and it's gorgeous, isn't it? ^_^


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So sweet

Author's Response: thank you :)

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Sweet! And I liked the use of the story she was reading.. :)

Author's Response: thank you :]

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Aw this leaves me wanting more!!!

Author's Response: check out deathlyhallows :]

thank you!


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haha...ohnoi likeit
ps-do u make banners? i hhavent started a story yet, but when i do, ill ask u if u can make meone, if oyu can/,thanks!!
pps- you should go to my site and leave a comment.
www.piczo.com/---harrypotter
thanks!
~Megan xxo

Author's Response: lol thanks :]

yep, i do! i could if you ask, yep.

sorry, i'mquite busy at the mo.

thanks for reviewing!


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huh. there's an ultimate story website? yeah, im lost. lol. that was really good. u have a great reason to be proud of ur ending! i loved it! awesome!
~estrella

Author's Response: Yea xP The links in there...

Thanks so much!! --hugs--

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:( Horribly sad! I would have loved to see them get together, but the folorness of the end was heart wrenching! Very well done!

Author's Response: Yea; but we'll have to wait 'til Deathly Hallows to see xP

Thanks so much!!!


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Hey, searched the 'At the burrow' picture. I love her artwork as wsell. it's on loads of peoples bebos.

Author's Response: Yea it is =]

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That was interesting. I really like your writing, and what I especially liked about this one-shot is that you were able to make it non-cliche and yet enjoyable (everyone was in perfect character), since they don't end up being there in the end. Please, it really was good! I hope you write other ones! I'm going to look for the pics. =)

Author's Response: That you so much =]

I tried my best to make it non-cliche and canon =]

Thank you so much!! I may, if I get time!

Go see her drawings! They're really good!!!


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So what happend to ron and Hermione? great job:)

Author's Response: We shall find out in Deathly Hallows =D

Lol

Thank you!


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Ahhh very cute! Is that a real story, or did you make it up? Cause I would love to read it!

Author's Response: Thx so much!

No, I made it up =P

Why would you ant to read it? You know the end! =P

Thank you!!


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It's realli gd1 Write more plz.

Author's Response: Thx so much!

This story will properly never be changed =]

Once a one shot, maybe always a one shot!

Thank you!


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Okay. At the end it didn't make sense.

Author's Response: Oh - you see, Hermione gave up trying to read because Ron was on her mind so much. So, she got up and left, leaving the book on the chair. The last paragraphs (in italics) are the book - Beautiful Disasters - text, and it reflects Ron and Hermione's relationship in real life, and would would happen if they confessed...

Understand? Or did I just make it even more complicated? =]

Thx!

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It's well written... just short and a contextuailly in middle of a chapter...a chapter that will end withe them either... admitting they have feelings for eachother or just having another blazing row!

Author's Response: Thx so much =]

Which one will it be...? Probably the row; they are both TOO stubborn =P

Thx!

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That was good! Very cute. I like how the book tied in, you need some confidence honey! It was good, dont put yourself down!

Author's Response: Thx so much =]

*hugs*


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I liked it! Only one thing:

At first, the girl in the book was Alicia, next, it was Allison.

But, other than that little tibit, it was great!

And, you really need more confidence as a writer to be able to cross the border of your strengths and weaknesses, and to explore more territories.

It was great!

Author's Response: Whoops =]

*changes* =D


I don't think my writing is as good as all the reviews tell me it is, but the more great reviews, the better I feel =]

Thx!


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no no! it was very good...well done and very on character.but i wish it would resolve! chapter 2? or a sequel maybe?

Author's Response: Thx so much =]

*hugs*


Maybe someday...

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I thought it was really good and sweet! I loved how the story tied in with the book Hermione was reading. And you wrote all the characters personnalities so well. Congrats!

Author's Response: Thx so much =]

Gald you liked that idea =]

Thanks so much!

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Lol, awww, that's okay. At least you wrote it down unlike some people I know. *cough*claire*cough* lol, sorry, you have no idea who I'm talking about. But yea., it wasn't your best. THAT'S OKAY, THOUGH :]]

Author's Response: Hmm... yea...

Thx =]

Twasn't my best

But I like it.... enough =]


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i saw those pictures! they're really cute, and you did a great job, et je pense que tu es une bonne ecrivain! (if you know french, i assumed...) it's kind of a coincidence, because i was thinking of someone really gorgeous named Jordan, and i wanted to incorporate him in something of mine, and i was like oohhh!! when i saw that!
good job!

Author's Response: Thx so much =]

Aren't her pictures amazin?!

(*doesn't know french, curses french teacher, looks it up*)
Awww, thanks so much =D *hugs*

Lol, cool!!! Spooky, eh?

Thx so much =]

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It's so romantic! I love it! You said that you don't think that it's that great, but to me it is awesome!

Author's Response: Thx so much =]

*hugs*

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Wonderful. Its a great start to a great story!

Author's Response: Thx so much =]

(tis a one shot)

Thx!


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oh em jee i heart'd it! that was awesome!! is beautiful disaster an actual book? if it is, i'm gonna have to read it! .. ok that was amazing [one thing i didnt get tho was how hermione didnt even notice ron entering the den =S.. oh well, i guess my imagination's failing me *sigh*.. ] anyways good job

Author's Response: thx =]

Nope... made it up =D

Whoa... lol

Silencing Charms =]
Gotta love them.

Thx so much =]

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