amazing. I love the poem. It's so beautiful and poetic like music.

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OMG that was your fist fan fic are you kidding me u are seriously fricken amazing i wouldn't mind a second chapter but this one had me balling like absolutely balling it was so sad and sweet OMG I LOVE THAT POEM I LOVE
THAT STORY

10 outa 10 more like a thousand outa ten

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it was good and definitely brought some tears to my eyes as well
good

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that was really good i found myself crying (but that means it was good)
noo i dont think you should make another chapter because i liked how it ended it was perfect

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I for one loved it but I think it should stay a one shot:)

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alright, good. keep going.

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The poem was the most breathtaking peice I have ever read. I cried the whole way through.

Kudos to you my friend,
You have a remarkable talent.

Author's Response: thank you!! ^^
im glad you liked it!^^
i never thought i could write good thinks, it really took me by surprise tht so many people liked it! well, thank you again1 ^^

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I JUST LOVED IT ! BRILLIANT, their is no other word to decribe your fan fic !

--- You should send it to Daniel Radcliff's father (the real - personal joke) ^^ And then ask him if he prefers it to the peom. lol


Author's Response: hm....who could you be...?
HELLO CLAIRE! CHUCKY LOVEGOOD! lool
thank you!!! im glad you liked it! XD
yea, i thought about sendint it to HIM too....dunno, i think i will, you know.
under the nickname of BUCKBEAK again!!! lool
bye, see u tomorrow!!^^

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I hate you, I hate you, I hate you, I hate you, you made me cry

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wow, that is soo romantic! it was really good, i even cried a bit because it was so sad and beautifuly written. Umm, I personnaly don't think you should write a second chapy, i think its fine like that. But i do think you shoud continue writing.

Author's Response: Thank you! im glad you liked it!
i really apreciate your opinion! ^^
yea, i also think im going to leave it that way, it seems good...and i hvnt the slightest idea of what to write next if i hd to... hehe ^^*
wel, thank you again!

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Wow! I'm not normally a RW/HG person, but this is touching! *sobs*

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*sniff* *sniff* *sniff*

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awww...that was really sweet.

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aww its so sad but its sweet. its great

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aww that was sad, good though liked her poem

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u made me cry!!!it was so romantic!!!AMANZING

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So, so ,so sweet!! Wonderful first fic!!

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it was great it made me cry.

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I was sobbing when I got to the poem. THIS IS SO SAD! HERMIONE SHOULD HAVE LIVED! AND WITH RON! -Cries head off- Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.

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