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Review #1, by Clowee_tee Torn in Pieces

19th August 2007:
That was amazing!!!

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Review #2, by HrXd Torn in Pieces

19th June 2007:
I feel as though you jumped into your story way to fast. It caught me off gaurd, and it wasn't that great of a read. I would slow us down a bit, and rethink about the beginning of the story. You begin with the characters right away I would have thought to give us a story background first.

I liked the song however so that was a good part. Think about my suggestion and maybe I'll review it again in the future.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the suggestions. I'll work on it and try to get back to you. Thanks again!

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Review #3, by AKALily Torn in Pieces

27th May 2007:
This was so sad- but so amazing!!! I love your writing!!!

Author's Response: thank you, im looking for your reviews now on all my one-shots..hope they keep you loving my writing!

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Review #4, by SlytherinSweetheart6 Torn in Pieces

20th April 2007:
That is very very sad! Although I did like the part when she was confusing the bar tender!

Author's Response: thanks! I gather you liked it? If you didn't thanks for sticking to your promise to review anyway. And the bar tender was my favorite part.

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Review #5, by delta Torn in Pieces

26th March 2007:
Awww, this was such a unique and interesting outlook on Remus and his character. I love how you develop the idea of him being a recluse and his relationship with Tonks. I love the way in which you use the Marauder aspects of him, Sirius, and Tonks so beautifully, and how you ended the story - with him as a recluse. Wonderful job. :D

Author's Response: I've always seen Remus as wise and tortured so that's where his development came from (we've honestly seen enough of him as wise). And of course, before all that he is a Marauder (the nicer one, but still). You are fast becoming one of my favorite reviewers, thank you!

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Review #6, by NicerDraco2025 Torn in Pieces

26th February 2007:
As alluded to, the delayed-but-here review special edition
(why we make fun of each other in the reviews)

Drake: I'm beginning to regret using "perfect" before. This is consummate and masterfully written. Not to mention unsurpassed by anything else I've yet found. You can take any idea and sculpt a prime story out of it. Then you take the fantasy of the books and seemlessly make them ever more realistic and so easy to relate to. How real this is is nearly scary, but so beautifully brilliant. Not to mention your absolute skill of the bittersweet/longing ending. I believe you're counting on Jo to finish this one though?

Dracoismyferretnotyours: Interesting interpretation of Remus and Tonks' relationship, but very VERY well done. ^.^ Perfect/Brilliant (as already said lol) ;D lol Makes them seem very much in love, and having a "normal" relationship, even though their lives are so unique. Shows what we want to believe with their relationship, but doesn't end on a happy note that normal romance stories do, or even how we would want them to.

~Draco is MY Pet Ferret
~The Aformentioned Pet Ferret named Mr. Malfoy

(different? I dont think anyone else has done this before)

Author's Response: Okay...I'm a tad confussed, give me a day to suss this all out....but, thank you both Drake and Ferret...lol. Yes, I'm leaving this for Jo. And yes, no matter how different Remus and Tonks are at the end of the day they're just two people in love..(I'm such a hopless romantic)..

~DelRosa

P.S.: Your reviews are the most different things I've ever witnessed..ever...I mean you have special editions and everything, which I love!


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