This is pretty good, I rather like it!

The plot's nice and so is the character portrayal, as well as the interaction! It's also quite well written too!

So Draco just leaned over and kissed her, oh, that sure was pretty damn hot, hehe!

I noticed that you haven't been updating this wonderful fic of yours in soon a little over two years of time, and that's sad because it's a good story.

Hopefully you decide to write more and when you do please don't hesitate to update ASAP, lol!

Author's Response: I only stopped to focus on A twisted game of Love and Jealousy and then I lost interest on fanfiction all together and life took hold and finally one day I came here and checked my reviews and I guess my readers who were still telling me to update even if I wasn't here for two years sparked the author in me and here I am back in business. so yeah, I will probably pick this up very soon. =]

thank you for reviewing!

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You officially have some of the shortest chapters I've ever seen. But they're pretty good, so that kind of makes up for it.

Author's Response: haha, oh man I think i do also.

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nice and very well written hehe loving the story so far :)

10/10

Alexa

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NO dont lose your motivation ive been daydreaming at school about wats going to happen next your tortuing me please keep writing please.

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Great story keep it comming

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I loved it! One thing I caught though was:
Hermione almost did not notice when Malfoy changed seats, moving to the seat right next to him.
Every once in a while you put him instead of her. That is one of the lines above. Other than that, great chapter! :7)

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OOH!! I can't wait to read the next chapter! But first the review! I really liked it! One thing I would like to mention though is when Malfoy says:
“Can’t help it, your pretty,” Malfoy said
He is talking like a hick. Malfoy should be suffisticated and talk like it! You might want to change that. Otherswise it was great! I loved the last line! :7)

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OOH!! Poor Hermione! I loved it! :7)

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I loved it! Poor Malfoy, not! He needs to get rid of a little ego! :7)

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It's awesome! It's a great beginning! I loved it! :7)

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Hey, I LOVED it like hell! So please, please update son!

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Lurv-ely

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great...

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Sweet. A little too short but its great so far.

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ahahah that was hialrious!!! update soon!!

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I just read that whole 5 chapters. and I LOVE it. Update please

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PLEASE WRITE MORE! THIS IS TORTURE, YOU'RE RIGHT, BUT I REALLY REALLY REALLY WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

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YAY!!! draco and hermione fan fics are my favs. cant wait to read the rest!!!


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OMG! You've got to update soon! This is really good!

Rebecka M.

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I love it! You are the BEST author on Harry Potter Fan Fiction (apart from me of course! (just kidding (I'm not that vein)))! I love the story, but I don't understand how you can not notice what you are drawing. This chapter was particularly good!

I love your stories!

Author's Response: *blushes and hides her face* Aww, shucks your making me blush. I'm not the BEST author on the site. There's much more better author then me out there. I'm just a girl with too much time on her hands but you do flatter me. :) Thanks for the review!

The Lovely Author,
~*Ashley*~
xXx

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uh oh!!Now u see it a bet right?But that lil ass i s callin her pretty every other second.oh he wants her lol.Now Hemrione why would you be skecthing Malfoys face...becuase u want him...yea u want him,hell i want him and hes not even real lol.But i like your story so far,you use good detail.And even though the chapters are 'short' i think their long enough its a chapter not the whole story you know?Its good to keep your readers wanting more.Plz continue:)

Jessie

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Aw, Ashley, you are so sweet. I'm so happy that my disappointment has fueled you to write another chapter. And I have said before, your writing improves with each chapter. Alas, I won't try again to get you to continue, I know it won't work. So I will content myself by awaiting the update of your other stories. Ah, I believe this is my shortest review to you yet, but I haven't anything else to say. Until next time, dearie!

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oOo kinda seductive ;] i like it :D but yea kinda short :/ update soon! :]

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yOU Love torturing us??!! why?? this is so good i love it please keep on going its fabolous!!!
-iliana

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Nooo don't lose your motivation! I love this story and I need more!! LOL.

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