That was so romantic! Loved it!

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-Lily

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that was such a good story. i dont know how you ppl do it. the romance stuff i mean. nothing was overdone or too much, the story was perfect :) i cant seem to get the hang of writing romances. you are truly a fantastic writer.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words :)

All I ever write is romances, so I think I'm starting to get the hang of it :)

Thanks again,
Lily

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very nicely written. Not rushed, and honest :) loved it

Author's Response: Thank you!

-Lily

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i love the sequel, but i think i like draco's side of the story a bit more. (beung the draco/tom lover that i am) needless to say, it was just as beautiful as hermione's. i like how you wrote twosides to the story so we know why draco was moving closer and why hermione was crying. its a sweet story i wont soon forget.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a lovely review :)

-Lily

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This was amazing! (: I've become big on Dramione in the past few weeks, and you did them justice. I love the idea that one little run-in woth Hermione could make him secretly fall head-over-heels for her. It was beautifully written, and I'd love to read more of your writing soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! I love coming to read things like this :). Dramione is a difficult ship to write, because it's ridiculously unlikely (I mean, let's be serious - it would never happen), but I think that's why I like it so much! I hope you come by and read some more!

With Love,
Lily

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Hi... I read all four of your short stories and they are wonderful. I would love to see "what happens next" after this one! Do you plan to write a sequel? I hope so! Sincerely, Beth :)

Author's Response: hi Beth. Welcome to HPFF!

Well, if you read them all, you would know that "What She Saw In His Eyes", is the sequel to this story, The Nature of Smiles. I'm considering doing a third Dramione piece, to follow up the two of them together, but we shall see.

Thank you for the review!

With Love,
Lily

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That was really sweet, the way they just seemed to connect. It was really well written, and it was(in my point of veiw) just how Draco would act towards something like this.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I always have a special appreciation when people notice the writing beyond the story itself!

With Love,
Lily

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So many things to say. OK:
1) Omg. Your names Lily!
2) I love this fic. It is sooo cute.
3) Being honest, I didn't think I would ever read this, and I'm glad that my caveman computer let's me read this one. (it doesn't allow a few of them to be read.)
4) One of my favourite one shots.

Author's Response: Haha, love the format!
1) Yup, my name is Lily :)
2) Thank you!
3) Don't you hate that about old computers?! I'm happy you could read it though!
4)Thank you again!

With Love,
Lily

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Beautiful :)

Good luck with the sequel, I'll definately by reading :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much, for taking the time to read and review, and for calling my little story here beautiful! I appreciate it!

With Love,
Lily

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Wow! So amazing! Can't wait 'till the sequel!

Author's Response: Thank you! Soon after the staff return from break, it should be up!

With Love,
Lily

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Oh My Merlin. This is the most beautiful story ive ever heard and im not joking its amazing it brought tears to my eyes. If i could i would give it 10 out of ten xxx

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

With Love,
Lily

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Awww that was so sweet! i really liked it :) you're a wonderful writer. 10/10!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

With Love,
Lily

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That was so cute! I really like how he grew to love her by his observations of her and because of her quirks and smiles. It was adorable!

Author's Response: Thank you :). It's kind of a dream of mine that a boy will love me for the silly little things!
I'm glad you like it!

Thank you for reviewing!
With love,
Lily

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Very nice :) I like how it was gradual and not like BANG IN LOVE. I'm gonna read the sequal now :)

Author's Response: Thanks :)
I appreciate the interest in reading the sequel, but I think you should wait for the revised version to be posted! :)

With Love,
Lily

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Sweet story. I enjoyed it. I liked how subtle evrything was, especially the last part down by the lake. Draco's thoughts are lovely through out.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

With love,
Lily

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um, that was kinda amazing!! you would have never guessed it was your frist dramoine or one shot. ah cant wait to read the next one!!
10/10!! juli:]

Author's Response: Haha, thank you! I'm glad I was able to hide my inexperience!
Thank you for reviewing, really.

♥Lily

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Oh goodness.
I love this whole one shot.
I never thought I'd say that. I usually hate one shots, but this was so beautiful.
Like the other one-shot by you i read - I want you to never stop writing. You really seem to have a gift. You made me want to cry in this. You knew exactly how to place Draco and hermione and you knew how to make it not seem completely unreal, like a lot of D/Hr shippers do.

Good lord. You made me want Draco to watch me all the time and memorize everything I did.

Don't you ever stop writing. The world might end if someone as good of a writer as you quit.

:)

-gilliegirl

Author's Response: Thank you, again =) For all the compliments on my writing ability!
You're too nice.
I'm glad you like it though!

xxLily

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i enjoyed this story, the language was beautiful and it really flowed, that said i think you could made draco's innitial noticing of her more gradual, like maybe he had stopped hating her and started noticing her a little bit before 'that day'

great use of language though, hope this helps

Author's Response: Gradual? Ok, got it! I'll work on it, I do like that idea!

Thanks for the wonderful comments! And of course you help!! ^_^

Thanks for the review {again :P}!

xxLily

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wonderful !really creative and fun to read!! yay!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

xxLils

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Interesting i like how discribtive you were nice

Author's Response:
Thank you!

xxLils

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ok, so i have to confess, i originally favorited this story so that i could easily find it again, because i didn't have time right then to read it. now i'm sorry i didn't come back until weeks later!

this story (one-shot, whatev) was very good. i noticed a few mistakes in grammar and flow, but you righted yourself.

it was short, sweet and to the point, like a one-shot should be. ideal. awesome. totally amazing. i am a dr/h writer myself, and i liked this fic immensely.

overall, 100.9/10

KissedByAVampire

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I'm so glad you like it so much!
Haha, no worries, I do the same things with stories, because I see them, but don't have time to read them right away.
Thanks for deeming it worthy of your favourites!

Thanks for the review!
xxLils

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aw, that's so cute! the attention to detail was incredible, and the way you portrayed his decisions and his confusion was really good...good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hehe, I love my details!
Thanks for the review!
xxLils

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o! that was god

Author's Response: Thanks!
xxLils

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There was a very good concept behind this. I liked how you made Draco fight against himself. I think that would be how it would happen, if this ship were actually possible. ;-) There were some technical problems though. Do you have a love for comma and complex sentences? I know I do. lol However, they don't always flow as well to the reader as they do in your mind. As for the actual story, I enjoyed it very much. Good job.

Author's Response: Hey. Thanks for reviewing!
Lol yes, I do actually. I know it's such a problem! I use commas and elongate sentences way too much. Honestly, it's terrible. But i supposed it's because that's what I like to read. I like to have lots of detail! Haha. I'll have to work on that in future.

I'm glad you like it!
Thanks again!
xxLils

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Hm, this was interesting. I really liked how he noticed all the tiny details and the description of the smiles. The ending with them by the lake seemed a little weak, but endings are difficult. Overall, nice job!

Author's Response: Hey there!
Thanks for reviewing so quickly.
Yeah, the ending needs work, I agree. I just haven't figured out how exactly...^_-
Thanks again!
xxLils

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