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Review #1, by krissyanne426 Marauders, Marauders, Marauders.

13th May 2011:
Hello there! Sorry it's taken so long between reviews!

This is another great chapter! I really liked Remus here, I thought he was kind of adorable. He was a bit snappy with Peter, which I didn't expect, but could totally see. I kind of see Peter as the only one Remus could really snap at. The other two are a bit too much for him.

I love James' obsession with lily, as well. Youve done that really well.

I like Maria, but I just don't really understand her yet. She's very much a mystery to me. I don't know if that's on purpose, but I'm a bit thrown off by her. She seems nice, i just don't really understand her yet.

This is great, keep up the great work.
Feel free to request again, I'll try not to take so long.

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Review #2, by krissyanne426 A Girl, a Stake and a Cloud

9th May 2011:
Hello there! Krissyanne426 from the forums here with your requested review. Sorry it's taken me what seems like lifetimes to get to it, life has just been crazy.

I really liked this! I've never read anything quite like it, so bonus point for creativity! This is a great introduction to your character. She's feisty and entertaining. I was a little grossed out by the stake through her heart though. I'm a bit squeamish, and that was a bit rough.

I think this is really great, though, and I can't wait to read the next chapter!


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Review #3, by LynnHelven Let Them Eat Cake.

10th January 2009:
Ah, the joys of a match-making James and Sirius, the devious pair!

Great chapter, it's a shame there's only one more for me to read for now...


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Review #4, by LynnHelven Marauders, Marauders, Marauders.

10th January 2009:
Chocolate? Well, you certainly know how to get a review out of me!

I enjoyed this chapter, I thought you were writing the Marauders very well and it's very obvious that they are at the stage where their friendship with Peter is starting to break down and he goes over to the dark side. I really felt for Remus when Peter (of all people) was victimising him and trying to give the game away to Maria before it had even started, the asshole.


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Review #5, by LynnHelven A Girl, a Stake and a Cloud

10th January 2009:
You got me hooked from the first sentence with that lovely graphic description of the 'dead' girl, who I presume is an unconventional vampire? If so, I am doubly hooked, due to my teensy tiny (cough) supernatural bein addiction!

Your descriptions are great, and I am really enjoying reading Maria's perspectives.


PS: I cannot help but notice that your story is lacking a banner. Could I mae you one? I will post a link for it in my review of Ch.4, if there is anything wrong, please tell me in a reply and I will re-make it! *is a banner junkie*

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Review #6, by ghostwriter1030 A Girl, a Stake and a Cloud

30th November 2007:
LadyBElle from the forums here. Well, I must say you can tell this is your first story, but I don't mean that as a put down, I cna just tell. Not many grammar mistakes at all. I like how you kept Maria's mom in the DUrmstrang mentality, calling muggleborns, 'Mudbloods" and such. Ewww, Tom!! if i'd been MAria I'd have cried to think, that Tom and my mother!!! Ewww! Well, off to read more :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!
I don't see that as a put down at all, because it is my first story, and, well, a first story has its flaws
Thanks very very much!

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Review #7, by _Forgotten Skies_ Let Them Eat Cake.

14th October 2007:
^_^ Well I was gonna wait till I read the rest of the chapters before I gave a Review, buuut I just can't stop laughing. Your Storyline is amazing and absoulutly so much fun to read. Your dialog is hystericle and well hehe I sofar just LOVE your story!

Author's Response: XD
Lol omg thanks so much for that review,
it made me all "omgsh yayyyy" and my cousin gave me this weird look for being so happy =/

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Review #8, by Dreamer_girl Let Them Eat Cake.

21st July 2007:
hahaha... awesome

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Review #9, by MoonlitTwilight Let Them Eat Cake.

26th May 2007:
Ah!!! Maria and REmus would be such a cute couple! Update soon! Ha! She eats a lot...O.o

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Review #10, by High_School_Outcast A Girl, a Stake and a Cloud

8th March 2007:
Well, this is a fantastically written story, with a bloody good plot!
You have three guesses as to who this is... If you are wrong i will hunt you down and hurt you brutally while we paint the drama room...
Just kidding.
Cant wait for the next chapter up so i can comment!

Author's Response: Amanda, sweetheart, this story has no known plot... yet...
Ok I've just decided a plot. Not telling you though ;)

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Review #11, by Dracos Ice Princess A Girl, a Stake and a Cloud

6th March 2007:
Hehehe i love this story.
update k i wanna no what happens next

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