11 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Dracogirl_86 For the hands, the lips, the eyes...

3rd August 2007:
Aww...this is a cute story! ;) It's very well-written too! I liked how you maintained the essence of the characters. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Most call it unrealistic.

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Review #2, by zac04 For the hands, the lips, the eyes...

8th July 2007:
How sweet ;)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.

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Review #3, by Buttmunch For the hands, the lips, the eyes...

13th June 2007:
its really cool. i like it alot. you should think about making it longer with
mabey a little more build up b4 the climatic "i luv u's" but for a short it wuz really good!

Author's Response: I'll think about it. I guess that's a good idea.

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Review #4, by kianne For the hands, the lips, the eyes...

4th May 2007:
aawww, the poem was sooo sweet, cinderella story right? scrap that, the whole chapter was amazing!

Author's Response: Thanks!!!

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Review #5, by inkismyworld For the hands, the lips, the eyes...

12th April 2007:
that was nice, good job. who is the poetry by?-iimw

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, it's an excerpt from a poem by Alfred, Lord Tennyson.

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Review #6, by VeniceLily For the hands, the lips, the eyes...

31st March 2007:
aww that was so sweet! adorable. would you mind telling me where that passge is from? i kow i know it, but i cannot remember. anyways, 10/10 from me!

Author's Response: It's from a Tenneyson poem called Maud. I heard it first in the movie A Cinderella Story.

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Review #7, by mbstargirl123 For the hands, the lips, the eyes...

30th March 2007:
Yea! However fluffy and happy that story made me, I must say, hahaha! I had a feeling u got the poem idea from A Cinderella Story! It is one of my favorite movies! But yeah. I read the reviews before the story and saw what u had written.
But this is a great story! I simply looove happy fluffyness! Great job!

Author's Response: thanks a lot. wow, it think that's the longest review i've ever gotten. i'm glad you like it.

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Review #8, by dramione4eva For the hands, the lips, the eyes...

11th March 2007:
eh it wuz ok.

Author's Response: umm...see other response.

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Review #9, by dramione4eva For the hands, the lips, the eyes...

11th March 2007:
eh it wuz ok.

Author's Response: Um...ok? why do you think so? I'd love it you'd elaborate a little.

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Review #10, by Charmingly Cliche For the hands, the lips, the eyes...

7th March 2007:
I really liked the poem in the middle; it gives me deja vu for some reason. Very very cute, very intruging. I thought the whole book thing was pretty funny of Hermione too =)
I give it many claps,
Charmingly Cliche

Author's Response: Thanks, you might know the poem because Chad Michael Murray says it to Hilary Duff in the movie A Cinderella Story. That's where I first got the idea.

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Review #11, by x_x_x For the hands, the lips, the eyes...

7th March 2007:
yay this was really sweet, i really liked the poem way to go!
x

Author's Response: Thanks, can't take cerdit for the peom though, it's by Tenneyson.

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