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Review #1, by SereneChaos The Malfoy's Ball

19th March 2007:
I really like it. It's not often that I read something where Regulus is the main character. It's really good hearing about what goes on in the Black/ Malfoy families. a few things though: Regulus is spelled-RegUlus; and you should watch your punctuation, such as commas when your characters speak. The commas represent a pause when they talk, so it's not just one long flat line, if you get what I mean.

Anyways, great story so far! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you that is what I have the most problems with grammer. I'll watch out for it thanks. ~Jessi~


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Review #2, by Dracana Stumbling on to an Angel

18th March 2007:
That was really well written, and Regulus is so HOT!!

Author's Response: thank you I have the other chapter done and will put it up in a second...

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Review #3, by norse_witch Stumbling on to an Angel

3rd March 2007:
Very cute. I wanted to read a story on Regulus!

Author's Response: Thanks the next chapters a bit darker-ish... but it will be up soon.

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