That was really cute. Update soon x)Author's Response: Thanks! I love your story 'If Only,' it's an amazing piece of work! :) Report Review
Well, I like it.
You've done well, (^_^)
Though I'm not a fan of block descriptions...you know, a detailed paragraph stating everything from hair colour to bathroom habits...But thats probably my only fault. And I realise it's just personal taste anyways.
But maybe, in the future you could try different ways to create a characters image. I love reading a story that give little dibs and dabs of description, that just flow as you read, but the end result is a clear image...But leaves some to the imagination...Just an idea...
I'd like to see where it goes, because you've got the beginnings of a good story here.
-OllyAuthor's Response: Hey Olly,
I agree with you about the block descriptions, i wrote this like months back when i was dead bored. I'm thinkin of maybe dropping this for a while, please check out my new story, i really do like this one, i worked on it, It's called Stay With Me...Don't Let Me Go. Well that would b awesome. Thanks so much for the wonderful review, i love the constructive critiscism! Report Review
Hahahhah. Nice. What makes Wizard style Truth or Dare different?Author's Response: In wizard truth or dare if you don't do it, you'll be forced to eventually. thanks! Report Review
HEY PEOPLE WELL I WOULD LOV IT IF U REVIEWED I PROMISE I'll WRITE BACK!!! MUCH LUV 2 U AL!! Report Review
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