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The story is really great, I love all ur ff, but its hermione Jean granger not jane

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It was really good. Can't think of anything else to say other than when is there going to be more?

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please post more i love this i cant wait to see what they find in the pensieve i know ur probably busy but please post more = )
-hoping u the best
Rachel Simmons

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Are you going to finish this? because i'm sad, i was really getting into it and there haven't been any new chapters in a really really long time =0(

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I loved this chapter! It was really brilliant!

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Oh w0w this was great =0) can't wait to see what they found

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i love richard, he is like the perfect best friend, of course my frineds are nice but he is awsome.

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Lily Evans was such a pretty girl, with flaming red hair. James Potter and Sirius Black antagonised her.Harry Potter, Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger.
I find out all of that, remember a few chapters earlier where i put down my guesses, which were all right. well expect the 1978

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TOLD YOU THAT SNAPE WAS TALKING ABOUT SIRUS
i told you i told you

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the jerk and the dog, they are james and sirus
the red head is lily
the snake, the weasel, the bever they are Harry Ron and Hermoine
when did Harry's parnets die? perhaps 1978?

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Sirius James Potter
i believe that Harry and Ginny's son is James Sirus Potter not Sirus James Potter

Author's Response: I began writing this before the 7th book came out. Not a bad guess in my part, lol.

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another sparkingling chapter

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great chapter, funny too

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wow dramatic finish to another kl chapter

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very kl chapter but way too short

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oh another gr8 chapter!

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yh gr8 chapter im enjoying it so far!

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OMG SO did not see THAT coming!!!

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amazing as usual col!! it realy is!

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that was absolutely AMAZING! you could totaly become an author. GREAT JOB!!!

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i felt like i was going to cry. it's soo sad that hogwarts is such a mess!

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I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! and i really like this side of harry that you're showing - it's hilarious! i'm just too used to the "saving-the-wizarding-world-24/7-uptight-teen" demeanor he's kinda forced to present all throughout the books - it's usually Ron who's immature in a funny way. you're an excellent writer! ^_^ 10/10

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that is awsome i really love it plz write more soon


that is going to be exciting i cant wait till u write the nex chapter because it is gonna be good i no it


ron is such a klutz though LOL

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how r they going threw walls u didn't really explain no offense though

i thought that the deluminator made them transport to different places not make them go threw walls

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