Interesting idea using the mirror.. cant wait to see more of this and how it plays out with Harry around...

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Ha! I love Alice in Wonderland, and I think this is shaping up to be a pretty good story. Can't wait until they meet the 'baby'. More please! 8/10

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This is a really good start I can't wait to read the other chapters.

(I can be paitient just please make sure the next update isn't in like two years or something)

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It was an ok story. I gave u a 7. I liked most of it and i noticed "Rabbit Hole" is from Matrix and "Through The Looking Glass" Was a Lost episode. You can always look up "names" on google and find different things.

Author's Response: I didn't know that - see, I am using the book as inspiration, and if you haven't noticed, the Looking Glass is a primary theme in Alice in Wonderland (the second one, not the first), plus Harry falls through the Mirror of Erised. So I thought it worked there. Also, "What Rabbit Hole" fit the chapter because it's something Harry says. :) Thank you for your review, I might change the names, but I really like what I have. However, I really appreciate what you said - I don't watch Lost and I don't like the Matrix, so I never would have picked up on it! Thank you for reviewing!

Cheers,
Dragonette

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if harrys in his 3rd year how does he know luna and is this story going anywhere?

Author's Response: Actually, I'm really not sure. I don't remember putting Luna in -- but then, I'm extremely overtired right now. Hold on...actually, I'm not sure. I just wanted that comparison in there. I suppose he knows her in passing? Surely, if she's only one year behind, he could know who she is? I know who people are @ my school in all the grades, but I've never been introduced to most of them. It's just a conversational thing. Ya know?

Yes, this story is going to go somewhere... *sighs* I have no time right now to devote to a bunch of stories, and due to the lack of reviews, this one might not be kicked into gear any time soon. But I do have an outline, and I know what I'm doing...don't worry. :)

Thanks for your review!
Cheers,
Dragonette

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Nice beginning! I love how you described Harry seeing Alice and how he didn’t think the rabbit was odd. The introduction between Harry and Alice was nicely done too. I wonder if the book Hermione read was Alice in Wonderland? ^_^ Anyway, I really like this. Can’t wait to read more!

Author's Response: :) Not saying anything. Nice guess, though. Aw, thank you, I'm so glad someone reviewed it! The next chapter will be up, eventually. :)

Cheers,
Dragonette

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