i have commented every single chapter! somebody should give me a prize...i really think i deserve it...after all my effort. thats so sweet...bless sirius's ittle cotton socks. i hope she reveals her identity i would be going crazy if i was her! please update soon...as soon as the que has opened again
love lucaay

Author's Response: hey! I ha e just read every single one of your comments and thank you oh so much! I am so glad that you like the story and i seriously wasn't sure if anyone was reading it anymore therefore as you could tell i sort of stopped a bit. But after reading your comments you have motivated me to keep on posting the chapters up! Thank you so much and i am extreamly happy that you enjoy the story. I will get posting asap!

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omg it is so much better in third person. it makes it easier to understand but i see what you where trying to do with the "yous" which was to put the reader in maddy's position.
poor serius its so fustrating if i was maddy i would be like "its mee.ee siriuss...lets have another babbyy"
nice chapter :)

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the mushy irony bless.

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this gets so...well.weird
is it meant to...or...not??
yet i still aime it

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omg.
i dont get how she can survive on a cracker a day.
and has anybody realised she is missing?
this is such a good story and i love all the drama and trama.
keep updating madam
!

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omg SHE IS PREGNANT
i like it!!
and i like the little death eater stuff.
x

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oh my god
that was so good
i knew what was coming when they went into that room
it would be soo cool if she did get pregnant hahahaa.
lucaay

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im confused where they not already going out...when they where rolling around in the horse poo???
lucaay x

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that was so sweet.
kissing in erm horse poo...how romantic
j'aime le plot.
lucaay

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"he took my head and we went to the village.or something like that"
hahahha
i liked it.
lucaay

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i like the different POVs it really works and ties the chapter nicely together. well done
lucaay

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c'est tres bien mon chou
je pense que maddy est tres bavard et je vou drais maddy et sirius aime. oui. je parle francais...oui.
c'est ubercool
lucaay

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"hey i love your story"

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i really liked it.
but the last bit made me feel a wee bit sad
because it just sort of ended
and it was like...
"and they lived happily ever after but not for a year because they moved house..."
and you sort of want to hear more about it.
but a ziillioonn more chapters to go-woott
lucaay

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can i just say in chapter 3 i had this floss bun-thing because my friend told me it was loverly, but im sorry it was horrible...and really expencive. Are they american?...are you american because english people really dont eat...floss. I AM NOT SAYING BEING AMERICAN IS A BAD THING. i would love to be american...do you have an accent??...you probably do. and what is floss actually made of?
back...
twas a loverly chapter.
loverly charaters and lovery dialouge
*winning smile*

Author's Response: lol this review made me smile. It had nothing to do with my story but i thought it was cool that an english person was actually reading my story lol. And no sorry i have never ever heard of a floss bun...It does not sound intresting at all and i do not think that they are amaerican, sorry. Haha and witht the accent i suppouse i do, an american one though. But i absolutly love the english ones. Also are you french? b/c you ;eft this really cool mess. all in french i believe and i couldn't understand a word of it but i thought it was pretty cool

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i love how fast paced it is
your really good at explaining stuff and its really straight to the point.
poor maddy peeing her pants...bless
lucaay

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i love how the chapters are so nice et short
c'est tres bon
nooice chapter

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wow i loved it.
10/10 missy

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This is a good story. you should keep going.

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OH MY! LOL! Keep up the good work.

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This is really good. I didn't see teh direction that this story has taken comming, but it is still good.


Author's Response: lol thank you, i'm so glad that you enjoy it. I try not to make my stories predictable bubt at the same time you want it to be eyecatching. Thank you for reviewing and i just psted a chapter so it is on validation right now, thank again

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Oo. I really like this. obviously so do many other people. *smile*
I have to keep reading now!

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I dont know, its getting a bit silly. Why doesnt she just tell him? They have a KID now for Pete's sake!

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i love this story plz update soon

Author's Response: hey! thank you so much for reviewing, i'm so glad that you love the story and i am terribely sorry for the wait, i just updated and they said the cue is 6 days, sorry for the wait!

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I liked the chapter alright. I just ask please and I am not trying to be rude or insulting or anything try to use "You" a little less.
Using it so much seems to make the character Madison McAdams disappear.
And I wouldn't want to see that she is an amazing character.
I very much would like to see what happens to her and Sirius and everybody else.
I truly like this story very much.
I hope you won't hate me.



Author's Response: Hey, i could never hate a reviewer, unless they give me a reason to lol. Thank you so much for your review and I have been considering changing the 'person' to third and that is what i will be doing lol. I have an Oliver Wood story that is in 3 person and i think it makes more sense. Thank you so much for your review and i am so glad that you like the story and have been reading it even though you don't like th 'person' I put ch.18 into validation and the 'person' has been changed. Thank you so much for reviewing, again i feel really bad but thank you so much for making me realize how much better it is without 'you did this and then you did that' lol

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