AWESOME opening line, this fic rocks!!Author's Response: Lol, thank you:) Report Review
i like it its good
haha poor ron, setting fire to things.Author's Response: :P
He's never really had to cope like that before:P
Thanks for reviewing:) Report Review
Ok I don't know why there is a lot of dead space but I loved it:)Author's Response: Because all fics have it and they like to taunt me lol:P
I do apologise for it, it's really annoying me lol
Glad you liked it:) Report Review
Nice glimps it of muggle life for the trio... you did that thing with the extra spacing again... But I really like it and seeing as this was your first one it showed the promise of talent that your current writing displays... Plz R&R mine I'd love to know what you think...Author's Response: Aw thank you
Yes spacing is crap with my stuff - need to work it out lol
This was originally going to be a full fic, but I found it so hard to write that I switched to writing Where Does The Truth Lie and changed this to a one-shot.
I'd love to check out your fics and review them, it's nice to know that someone cares what I think:P
Thanks for the review!:) Report Review
i like it so far update soon i like the idea of ron living like a muggle! Author's Response: Aww thank you!!
I don't know if I will though
I found it really hard to write not in first person and it doesn't seem to have been that well-liked.
But maybe if I suddenly have an urge to write more, I will do! Report Review
I like it, but it is a little confusing. Keep up the good work.Author's Response: Aw thank you!
Yeah, I know.
I usually write in first person, so this was a bit of a chore.
However I'm waiting for a new story of mine to be validated, which is first person, so hopefully it'll be a bit better than this one! Report Review
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