Great story, absolutely wonderful.

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Aw she shouldnt have left him!

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that was really cool. you should make more chapters, and i have this really cool idea so here it is. okay, it could be like a couple of years later and hermione should have her heart broken again and again. Every time someone breaks her heart she should *hum hum* with draco to make her forget. Then Draco falls in love and and is in agony. than he finally tells her how he has fallen for her and then they could be together!
Just an idea i had (it came to me after i read it, sorry!) Use it if you want!

Jenna

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I really liked it. i wish it wasnt just a oneshot

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I liked it, very good. Great Job. On to the sequal, which is what brought me here.

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loved it

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all right. I was suprised when I read 'head girl'. At the beginning it seems like they are older and out of school, highlighted by the fact that Hermione and Ron are engaged. Most people do not get in engaged at 17 :) but it's your story so whatever. Reading it I actually thought of another song when i read Hermione asking him to make her forget Ron, have you ever heard the song 'Erase Her?' Course for this story 'Erase Him' may be more appropiate eh? it's a few years old, but i like it. Right, back to the story, i think i'll give it a 7. Nice but nothing about it really stood out. (in other words pretty good, anything less than decent you bet I would be giving it like a 4. I'm a tough rater, i don't think i have EVER given a story a 10, and stories that i absolutely love I've still been known to give them a 8 for spelling mistakes or something...) So feel proud, good little story thing.

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well written. continue with more chapters.

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i love this srory and you should do a sequel.out of ten,one being bad ten being good, i'd say 20/10

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great!! i should do a sequal

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SEQUEL!


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AWESOME! I think it was very very good.

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I loved it! One of the best have read!

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I loved it! One of the best have read!

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I loved it! One of the best have read!

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There were a few little mistakes in there. I didn't like how you only scratched the surface of emotions. There was so much more to story; a deeper side you never explored. That was a little disappointing. Overall, I did enjoy the story, even if Hermione was portrayed as particularly shallow. Good job though. Cheers.

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yeah i am the first to review i love this story its great so good in fact you should do a sequeal 9/10

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