This is quite nice, really. It is very unusual that anyone picks Vane as a character. I think maybe you could have played up her father driving a bit, since he is supposed to be a wizard and there probably aren't that many who know how to drive. There's a little too much distance here though, I think it would have been more intense in first person. I liked it a lot though. It has the potential to bring a different angle to the events of the last couple of years. I'd be interested to know if Romilda joined the DA and her true relationship with Ginny etc. It would have been nice if she had maybe already mentioned Harry Potter, in order to set up her crush though. Report Review
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