Just read all of your chapters and I would like to say that by far you are the best writer on here that I have come across when it comes to 'draco' stories... Hope you keep up the good work.

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hey i noticed you havent finished the story and i was wondering if maybe you could i really would love to see how yours ended

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More from the same movie:

May I admire you again today?
Drinking and driving don't mix, that's why I ride a bike.
It's called a sense of humour - you should get one - they're nice.
(about the guy's gym changing room) It's the end of the month, they're out of toilet seat covers!
This is an incredibly romantic moment, and you're ruining it for me!
Good morning! Welcome to another day of higher education!
Money really means nothing to me. Do you think I'd treat my parents' house this way if I did?

A bit of funny dialogue:

Guy: I've been out with a lot of girls at this school. I don't see what makes you so different.
Girl: I have some taste.

Girl: Were you here long?
Guy: No, no! Three, four... hours

Girl 1: I don't know what I'm doing!
Girl 2: Wishful makeup!

Girl 1: Well, not nothing. I mean, I kissed him...
Girl 2: Anywhere interesting?

Sorry if this is annoying :)

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Here's a funny (well I think it's funny) quote/one-liner thing: 'I'm off like a dirty shirt'. From an awesome 80's movie called Pretty in Pink. This is the best Draco/OC fanfic I have ever read. One of the only ones I've read that I haven't skimmed through for the Draco parts. Freaking fantastic.

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Wow this is awesome please keep writing!

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This is an epic story :)

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This is really funny so far, i can't wait to keep reading :)

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Loved it!

My favourite line:
"Aren't you worried about the future?" she asked.

"No darling, it always arrives too quickly for my taste," I answered.

I don't know why, I just really love this line :)

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Hi =)
So this is my second or third time reading this story and I still love it. I love how you portray Evee's mind and everything she gets in to. I've been hoping that you write another chapter or a sequel or something. I read in one of your review responses that this story is just for fun and just kind of writing to write for fun. Well, maybe you could do a sequel that deals with a deeper Evee and perhaps the war? Just a thought =)

No matter what you decide, I still love the world you created. Thanks for a fabulous read.

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i love your story! it's not abandoned is it?

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hey
I have to say your story made me laugh so hard I cried. I love stories about the supposedly dark characters(snape, draco). I love evelyn she is very rounded character that just makes you laugh. I can understand your hiatus but that doesn't mean I won't be waiting with baited breath. Keep writing because you rock at it.

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I absolutly love it. I've been meaning to leave a review, but all ways foget. I cant wait for the next chapter.

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Really enjoyed your story. its really interesting and i think you've done a really good job of keeping the characters in... eh, character. i've gotten confused a few times about the status of draco and evee's relationship, but that might have been intentional. please continue soon.

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Well, to be honest, I am not a huge fan of this story. Evelyn is kind of a mary-sue and she reminds me too much of those "lolrandom" people I've known at school. She's not a particularly deep or interesting character. In addition, a lot of her retorts don't make any sense. I'm guessing that's intentional, but it still bugs me, regardless.
The story itself is kind of boring--not really going anywhere. It could use more of a plot.
Points for making fewer grammar and spelling errors than is usual, though.

Author's Response:

Ah! Honesty! How rare a commodity.

I actually appreciate the review, you could have been fatally nasty but you weren't and stated your opinion. In truth, I wrote this a fair few years back now, I occasionally update here or there, but this is what I call my 'junk writing' aka, sugared up, no plot necessary, just for laughs. I didn't want her too angsty or too deep or anything, I just wanted to have a bit of fun with her. 'Twas all in the name of humour.

The next chapter I post will be the last probably, if any of my fans are still checking up.

It's always good to hear constructive critique!

Have an awesome life,
Elle

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yh!!! u better hurry up, i NEED more evee!!!
AMAZING!!!
LOVE the story!!!
:-)
xxx

Author's Response: Hahaha, sorry I haven't updated, the next chapter is going to be the last, I can't believe I've takne such a long break from it. So I do apologise, but i think I can wrap it up neatly in the next one. I'm so glad you liked it, heaps of love!!! x

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I AM AN EVEE ADDICT!!!
AMAZING!!!
i LOVE this story!!!
:-)
xxx

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LOVE it!!!
AMAZING!!!
HILARIOUS!!!
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xxx

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LOVE IT!!!
AMAZING!
:-)
xxx

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LOVE it!!!
i want more of EVERYTHING!!! (im really helpful arnt i...? lol)
AMAZING!!!
:-)
xxx

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no idea...
LOVE the story!!!
AMAZING!!!
:-)
xxx

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yeah, its really great!!!
LOVE it!!!
AMAZING!!!
:-)
xxx

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that was rather amusing!!! (oh god, im starting to sound like my crazy english teacher... depressing...)
LOVE it!!!
AMAZING!!! ('Mighty Lizard Queen' and 'Uncie Severry-poo'!!!)
:-)
xxx

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LOVE it!!!
AMAZING!!!
poor evee...
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xxx

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AHHH!!!
LOVE this story!!!
AMAZING!!!
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xxx

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LOVE it!!!
you are SO funny!!!
AMAZING!!!
:-)
xxx

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