i thought it was really good.. it would make an interesting story
ROCK N ROLLAuthor's Response: Awh, thank you! :] Report Review
aw thats like a rely sweet soryAuthor's Response: :) thanks ! Report Review
aww, this was a really adorable one-shot!! i really enjoyed it!! i like sirius's nickname for her, Jazzy!! lol!Author's Response: : ) Ahaha, thank youuuu. Report Review
this is good!Author's Response: : ) Thank you. Report Review
Ah, the fluff! XD Adorable story.Author's Response: xD Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuu. Report Review
Aww, great fic! Really very, very cute! Full 10/10 from me. =) --Rp/KateAuthor's Response: : ) Thank you very muchhh Report Review
i really like this one-shot and i would love for there to more than one chapter with sirius and jasmine...
♥~AH~♥Author's Response: Awhh, thank youuu. Well, I'm thinking of putting them together in my Mr.Popularity Confesses story, but I don't know. I do want to write a story of them together, but I can't think of anything else to do to them. Maybe I'll just continue to write one-shots with them from after their kiss in this. Report Review
Is there going to be a sequel-type-thing to this?Author's Response: : ) Thank youuu. There will be a little bit of them in my new story Mr. Popularity Confesses, but once I'm finished with that story I will be putting out one about them. Well, maybe even before I finish that story. : ) Report Review
great story, hope u make anova sirius and jasmine 1,
it wud b gud 2 read bowt dem in their hogwarts dayzAuthor's Response: : ) Thank youuuu. I'm having a problem with writing, since well, I'm not even trying. But I will try to get one out someday. ( : Report Review
i loved it=DAuthor's Response: thank youuuuuuuu. : ) Report Review
It was good but you could have made it a tad longer!Author's Response: Thank youuu. Oh I'm sorry. I have a really bad problem writing long chapters and such. I am trying to get better. Also, you can keep checking back because after I write a few more chapters, I will be posting my new James/OC story and there will be some Jasmine/Sirius action. After I complete the James/OC story, and start on the sequel, and finish some stories, I will be posting a new story that centers around Jasmine and Sirius! So there will be longer (hopefully) and lots more (most definately) moments between the two of them. Thanks for reading and reviewing! : ) Report Review
hahahaha I love it! Very good, they're so cute!
Weasley kidAuthor's Response: Awh, thank you so muchhhh! Report Review
I LOVED IT!! It was so sweet and made me want to read more!! One of my favourite Stories!! Author's Response: Awhhhh, thank you oh so much! : ) Keep checking back, because in my new James/OC story that will be coming out in a few weeks has some subtle Jasmine/Sirius. Also, the two of them will get their own full length story! : ) Report Review
wow this was really . wow. Author's Response: Ahaha, thank you so much! : ) Report Review
A very cute story [: Fan of Wicked, eh? "Momsey and Popsicle" made me smile :D Anywho, I enjoyed this. Great work and keep it up! Author's Response: Thank you very much! Aha! Yesssire I am! : ) Wicked is amazing. Sirius is just so...outthere, I just had to put the Momsey and Popsicle part. Thank you so much! : ) Report Review
This was a great story!
ElvengirlAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! : ) Report Review
that was wicked sweet ^_^Author's Response: Awh, thank you. You're wicked awesome for reviewing! : ) Report Review
Oh my gosh, I really like that. How sweet! You should write a story about these two from their Hogwarts years so we can get to know them. I mean this one-shot was really good, you'll be amazing with a whole novel before this part.
~EmaAuthor's Response: Awh thank you so much! I'm in the process of writing a James/OC story and I'm thinking of putting some Jasmine/Sirius stuff in it. And once I finish the James/OC story then I will most definately write a story about Jasmine and Sirius. Thank you so much for reading! : ) Report Review
I really really like the start!
(yes and I do realize that this is the lamest review ever)Author's Response: Awh, thank you so much! This is only a one-shot, but I am in the process of writing a James/OC story and I had a different idea for Sirius' love interest, but now I think that I'll use Jasmine as it. : ) Thanks so much for reading. Report Review
That was really sweet!!
Keep up the great writing!!Author's Response: Awh, thank you so much!
I will, don't worry.: ) Report Review
ah that was cuteAuthor's Response: Thank youuuuuuu. : ) Report Review
Oh, cute story. I really liked it. Very clever. Go Sirius! YAY! WOOT! Go get 'er, boy! Another story, please!
~Elf Jam Author's Response: Awh, thank you so much. =] Report Review
pretttyyy good... i liked it a lot. maybee add a little more actual romanceee though. haha im a sucker for romance storiess. anywaysss loved it,, 8/10.
ps check outt my story if you get a chancee. thanks a bunchAuthor's Response: Awh, thank you so much! Well, I'm actually thinking of making Jasmine and Sirius' story into a novel story, so there will be more romance to come. If you like romance stories so much, read some of my other stories. Almost all of them are romance. Will do! Thanks for reading! =] Report Review
that was so cute.especially when they were so nervous.it was so fluffy.lol! 10/10Author's Response: Awh, thank you so much! =] Report Review
aww that was luverly!!! Really twas awesomes! I loved Jasmine and Sirius's interaction with one another and I really think you should do the whoe switching chapters story thing with em! Anyways Loved it and cant wait to read more!! Keep up the greatness!Author's Response: Awh, thank you so much! : ) I'll see if I can get out a full story with them, but I can't be sure. Thanks so much for reading! Report Review
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