good job. but what's up with all the capital Ls??? It's kind of odd to be honest. Great job otherwise though! Report Review
LOL very sweet, carry on! Report Review
Love the idea of Lily being the new-girl...
I like the way you write and I just can't wait to read some moreAuthor's Response: Wow! Thanks a ton. I ahve the 2nd and 3rd chapters but i can't seem to get them validated due to some spacing errors, but I'm trying to fix it! I'll be looking forward to your reviews! Thanks for your support! Report Review
Very interesting plot. I like the twist that she didn't come to Hogwarts until her 7th year, 8/10 and hope you update soon.
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Hm, very interesting. I like the spin, I mean the Lily is the new-girl. Reminds me of my story, anyways. Still very, very good. I love all the thoughts but into it. Sometimes its rather annoying, but it works for you. Keep it up. 10/10. Report Review
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