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Reading Reviews for The New Girl

5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Nymphie Lupin

22nd November 2007:

good job. but what's up with all the capital Ls??? It's kind of odd to be honest. Great job otherwise though!

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Review #2, by Aurora Katie

Chapter 1 First Impressions

24th September 2007:

LOL very sweet, carry on!

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Review #3, by Me...

Chapter 1 First Impressions

18th August 2007:

Love the idea of Lily being the new-girl...
I like the way you write and I just can't wait to read some more

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks a ton. I ahve the 2nd and 3rd chapters but i can't seem to get them validated due to some spacing errors, but I'm trying to fix it! I'll be looking forward to your reviews! Thanks for your support!

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Review #4, by Blue Flame

Chapter 1 First Impressions

13th April 2007:

Very interesting plot. I like the twist that she didn't come to Hogwarts until her 7th year, 8/10 and hope you update soon.

♥Cait

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Review #5, by X3xHermione_Jane_Potterx3X

Chapter 1 First Impressions

13th March 2007:

Hm, very interesting. I like the spin, I mean the Lily is the new-girl. Reminds me of my story, anyways. Still very, very good. I love all the thoughts but into it. Sometimes its rather annoying, but it works for you. Keep it up. 10/10.

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