{reviewid: 2140825, reviewer: 'Alagorn'}
13th June 2009:
Good plot. Please PLEASE Moony, work on stories when you can spell correctly! It would help this story very very much. But otherwise a great story. And also, try to put your sentences in paragraphs. I've noticed you're using just sentence.enter.sentence.enter-- it's gotta be a paragraph. Where you write from the left side of the page to the right side of the page completely. And also indent your paragraphs when you do that.
You heard it, a review from,
THE THS BROTHER ALAGORN!
((Random burst done now.))
Author's Response: Hey, I haven't updated this in YEARS because I moved it to fanfiction . net /s/3186/1/Truth
but I haven't updated it either, seeing as I have run out of idea's. but if you want to read it (its changed a lot) please do!
thanks,
Kat
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{reviewid: 2013905, reviewer: 'tea%20lover'}
21st December 2008:
very good i liked it
Author's Response: Hey, I haven't updated this in YEARS because I moved it to fanfiction . net /s/3186/1/Truth
but I haven't updated it either, seeing as I have run out of idea's. but if you want to read it (its changed a lot) please do!
thanks,
Kat
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{reviewid: 1558290, reviewer: 'Livvy%20Potter'}
6th August 2007:
aw...please update soon
Author's Response: I'm working on it!
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{reviewid: 1532956, reviewer: 'copycat'}
25th July 2007:
good story, but where's the ending?
Author's Response: i's coming...just vary slowly
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{reviewid: 1430011, reviewer: 'AngelPotter1921'}
23rd May 2007:
This is very good.. you should update! soon.. lol
Author's Response: I will! thanks!
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{reviewid: 1426893, reviewer: 'ginny_weasley_54'}
21st May 2007:
wow.
Author's Response: Thanks?
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{reviewid: 1417952, reviewer: 'AngelPotter1921'}
15th May 2007:
It was good.. please hurry up with those next chapters lol.
Author's Response: I just posted it! so be watching!
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{reviewid: 1417449, reviewer: 'ginny_weasley_54'}
14th May 2007:
i LOVEthis story. i can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I just posted it! so be watching!
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{reviewid: 1417137, reviewer: 'mrsmolly'}
14th May 2007:
you cant just leave it at that!
however the footnote is a great help,
but i will say it anyway
please update!
Author's Response: Haha! thanks! I just posted it! so be watching!
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{reviewid: 1417117, reviewer: 'ILoveLost1888'}
14th May 2007:
ok
Author's Response: lol ok
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{reviewid: 1414432, reviewer: 'Kyrra'}
12th May 2007:
Can't see why James wouldn't have gone over to them, or them going shopping after they found out there son was alive. still a nice story, please update soon!
Author's Response: Aahh Now, if I answered that..you would know how my braid works, now wouldn't you? But I'll try to dumb it down...
1. James didn't go after them cuz he thought they'd be mad, and he didn't want to talk to them where strangers could hear.
2. James and Lily thought by going shopping they might see or hear something about Harry...didn;t I put that in the Chapter? really? well ok, I'll just have to some how...Bye! thanks for the review! I just posted the next chapter so be looking!
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{reviewid: 1369720, reviewer: 'AngelPotter1921'}
8th April 2007:
I usually dont read these types of stories.. i stick with Hermione/Draco.. but this seems like an awsome story.. i'm getting more into fics about James and Lily being alive.. anyway please update soon!
Author's Response: I will! I'm doing my best to get the next chapter done!
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{reviewid: 1364844, reviewer: 'mrsmolly'}
4th April 2007:
please update!
Author's Response: I'm trying!
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{reviewid: 1334380, reviewer: 'Kathrine_Lupin'}
9th March 2007:
I've changed somethings, in the 2ed chapter.
Katherine_Lupin
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{reviewid: 1333047, reviewer: 'Blanca%20Rosa'}
7th March 2007:
Its pretty good but seems a little rushed... also some of the page repeated itself when they're at the quidditch supplies store. Other than that its okay.
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1329890, reviewer: 'Loopy'}
5th March 2007:
Really good!! Please continue
Author's Response: thanks, I will!
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{reviewid: 1329798, reviewer: 'cameo%20ruby'}
5th March 2007:
HA HA!!! YOUR CAUGHT JAMES POTTER!!! soz about that...i loved this chapter and i love this story sooo much!please ad another chaapter really really son!
Author's Response: LOl! it's ok! thanks! I'll up date soon!
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{reviewid: 1329784, reviewer: 'Rurouni_Kenshin'}
5th March 2007:
Look so far its great
Please, please, please write more
~Cat
Author's Response: I will thanks!
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{reviewid: 1329636, reviewer: 'angeldust'}
5th March 2007:
nice twist, would be better without the misspellings though. but i like the plot.
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that.
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{reviewid: 1328205, reviewer: 'a'}
3rd March 2007:
it pretty good
Author's Response: thanks!
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{reviewid: 1318338, reviewer: 'mrsmolly'}
23rd February 2007:
please update
Author's Response: I will, most likely tonight I'll Post it
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{reviewid: 1316591, reviewer: 'cameo%20ruby'}
22nd February 2007:
This story is Wicked!!!
please carry it on! it would be great!pleaassseee!
Ill be your friend?! :P lol!
nah im serious it would be really kool!
please add another chapter really really soon! and a long one?
10/10...but please carry it on!!!
Author's Response: THANKS!!!!! I will, most likely tonight I'll Post it. It might not be that long though.
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{reviewid: 1316557, reviewer: 'likely'}
22nd February 2007:
its nice why don't you carry on i'm sure it would be a great story
Author's Response: OK! I will, most likely tonight I'll Post it.
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