4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by lovette Chapter 1: The Letter

18th April 2008:
please continue love it

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Review #2, by blackruby Chapter 1: The Letter

14th April 2007:
Well hope for more soon but Harry should of questioned Albus to make sure he was who he said he was before he took anything from him

Author's Response: Oh, I knew I forgotten something.

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Review #3, by DangerDog Chapter 1: The Letter

15th March 2007:
yes! good good good! just keep going like this. but make the chapters longer!

Author's Response: Thanks! I am waiting for ch.2 to be validated.

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Review #4, by jmegray Chapter 1: The Letter

6th March 2007:
Hey there! (waves from her own authors page). Reveiws are a wonderful way to let you know how you are doing. You have my story as one of your favorites so I am returning the favor. First of all, it's a good idea but I would have added a bit more to this chapter, actually get into Dumbledore arriving end with a cliff hanger, like telling him about the relative (ta dam). Ok next, this is a strange post, the spacing is weird, how did you do that? Also, either get a BETA or just someone to read through it real quick, there are a lot of errors in grammer. You use the word usually when it should be usual and hear instead of here. Just get someone to a basic read through for you and point out the minor stuff. I know mine is not perfect but I read it about 50 times before I submit and sometimes I still find errors after it has been validated so I go in and edit them. If I were you I would add alot more to this chapter and it will generate more readers. Also, I didn't get very many readers until I made a banner, it seems to attract people more. Good Luck!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and letting me know that. Since you brought it up, do you know how to get a BETA and banner cause I don't know.I will see what I can do about making the first chapter longer, I was thinking about it anyways so thanks. By the way, I love your story!

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