Perfect, just perfect. If Kat couldn't cure the Longbottoms, at least Neville had a "Moment in Time". I would think Neville will hold onto that for as long as he lives. Maybe it will give Alice and Frank some peace in their insanity.

Author's Response: I thought the exact same thing. Moments in time are more precious than anything this earth can boast of. I'm glad you appreciated the story. Thanks for the lovely review.

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Aww, I really liked that. It was so bittersweet. But it seemed perfectly appropriate. I applaud you on your writing and your wonderful idea. =]

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad the bittersweetness was appreciated. :)

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awww! that is REALLY cute! very sad though, it would have been nice if his psrents had stayed, but not really fitting with the story.

Author's Response: I toyed with the idea of having his parents stay that way, but the story had other ideas... I'm pleased you liked it. Thanks for the lovely review. :)

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aww.. it was so sad but really sweet as well - i havent read the companion fic so i wasnt really aware of the setting and characters but i understood Neville's feelings anyway and felt a lot of sympathy for him

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. (If you want to read the companion fic, its called "Alternate Scenes". You can find it on my author page.) I wanted to capture Neville's feelings about the situation and I'm pleased to know I succeeded. Thanks for the review! :)

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aww, thats sweet, kind of what i expected alice and frank to be like, if they weren't unconsious

Author's Response: Thank you. I tried to capture what I thought Alice & Frank were like. I'm glad you liked it! :)

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