It appears this story has been abandoned which is really a shame because you are a very good writer! Report Review
RON IS SO SWEET. i love him Report Review
I love it! It's amazing. I never thought about how it can really tear people appart when they are trying for a baby. Also, I like the spin, that Ron isn't ready for kids. Anyways, when you get the next chapter up, could you let me know? Report Review
I was getting excited thinking that they were going to have a baby. Anyways, you are an amazing author. I love how you paint a picture. Also, you do a good job of hitting emotions, at least, what I would picture it to be like. Report Review
oh i like this story even though its sad
please updatwe soon!
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When will you be updating? I've been checking practically every day. I love this fan fic! Please continue it! Report Review
I don't think you realize how great this story is! Please update soon because I'm hopelessly hooked. Report Review
when u gonna update? Report Review
Wow! that was very well written! I can't wait to read more! Poor Hermione! Report Review
AWW! that's so sweet! Report Review
Good start! can't wait to see how it ends. Report Review
Very poignant...and heart breaking. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. Report Review
keep the chapters coming! Report Review
aww, love the last part! Report Review
aww, its heartbreaking to see Hermione like this. I fell so bad for her. I also feel bad for Ron, he's trying so hard to keep Hermione happy, but she always pushes him away. I hope that stops, because its not good to be alone with her situation and thoughts. I hope that Ron makes Hermione stay and be with him, please dont make them seperate. That would be tragic! But its your story, which your doing a wonderful job on. I love this story. Please update soon, really really soon!
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Interesting story.. can't wait to see where it is heading. Report Review
Wow Coconut dear. This is sad. Perhaps the saddest thing I've read in fanfic. I don't even know how to express everything I'm thinking. Moody's words sound like just the kind of joke that cuts to the core without exactly meaning to.
Hermione's emotions. Poor girl. I think what makes me saddest, beyond the inability to have children, what seems so sad to me is the separation between Hermione and Ron. It's so HUGE and hurtful and haunting and silent, I hate it. This problem, not having children, yes, it's terrible, but it would seem so much more bearable if they were bearing it truly together. Bearing one another.
They're trying, I know. But I sense Hermione's need to withdraw, and I understand, yet Ron is stuck with nothing to do, no way to help.. And I feel for him too. This is gutwrenching, dear. Ron tried to fix the situation but it still bothered Hermione. He wanted to take her home and love her, but she didn't want that then. The poor fellow, how he keeps from tearing up when she wants to go home with out him, cuts off his offer to curl up together... Golly...
I do hope something can happen to help the downward spiral because... golly it hurts dear. And what an amazing writer you are to capture everything so beautifully, so tragically. Report Review
Was Moody drunk or what? What lovely conversation skills he has. :) I like how you included a bit of foul language in Hermione's thoughts. It shows that she has matured from the uptight bookworm. Report Review
Loved it!! Great chapter. A change is exactly what Hermione needs now... something to keep her mind away from, everything that's happened.
Moody, what an arsehole. Glad Ron took charge of the situation. It seems it got out pretty well... it's amazing how Ron and Hermione know each other so well, but maybe this time she's wrong about what he wants... maybe he did mean what he said, but only because he thought that way, he would take some pressure out of what's troubling her...
Maybe he thought that if he could convince her to wait a couple of months more, she would have healed enough to have a baby, wouldn't he?
Oh, well, we'll just have to go on reading!
Great chapter, please update soon!!
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I hope they do end up having a kid after all this.
Nicely writtenAuthor's Response: Anything's possible :) Report Review
awww its so sad Author's Response: yeah, it is unfortunately. But it will get better. Life ebbs and flows. Report Review
ok this story is amazing in a beautifully tragic way, i wanna cry for hermione, its such a sad topic and the way your dealling with it is just, for want of a better word, perfect. the way you portray hermione as bitter yet slightly hopeful. this is one of the best stories i've read and i congratulate you for that, its well written and you deal with the subject perfectly.10/10
hopefully it will get a little better for ron and hermione, hey its fiction anything can happen, as JK proved when she made fireworks breed to create flying pigs in book 5! adding to favouritesAuthor's Response: Thank you so much. It is a very sad truth that far too many couples suffer through in silence. Report Review
i was almost crying at the end. so sad. poor hermione. poor ron.Author's Response: It's a painful reality too many couple suffer through. Report Review
oh this is so sad ... n the saddest thing is tht its something tht so many couples actually have to face.
stil 10 out of 0 for getting the emotion out of me ... lol
xxxAuthor's Response: It's a very hard situation to be in, and the worst part is that it's not openly discussed. Sorry for making you cry though. Report Review
i have one reaction to this chapter ...
Y A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A Y ...
for ever and a million years!! oh but i do hope tht it goes ok i mean teh pregnancy ... oh im so happi for thm =D
definate dix sur dix =D
xxxAuthor's Response: Welllll, we'll see ;) Report Review
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