i love it! keep up the good work!!Author's Response: Thanks Report Review
i love it! keep up the good work!! Report Review
well u skipped like 4 years in there, but wutevs... and i just realized that in ur last chappie, they shouldnt have the nicknames, unless thats fifth year, but i thot it was still 2nd... ok now i read it, that all looks pretty mean, so im just gunna say great stry and 10/10!!! Report Review
o i like it so much
i know sadder times are to come but update as fast as humanly possible.
try to make the seperation of the marauders not so bad.
it breaks my heart honestly Report Review
Ok, this was a nice chapter, but it was still very short. It would be nicer if it was longer.
I didn't get it when Sirius says “You know, you really do look like Padfoot when you do that,”- i got confused at what they were talking about.
i hope you keep writing. =D xxxAuthor's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. And I know it was short, but so is my attention span, lol. And I don't think Sirius said that line, I think James said it, or was supposed to. Thanks! Report Review
Ok, I love the ending '
“Nah, we’re the marauders,” - that one line makes up the whole chapter, it was really really nice.
But i wished this chapter was a bit longer, because i was just getting into it and it just ends =(.
What year are the Marauders in now? You should of indicated that somewhere along the line, it just makes it easier for the reader.
but another nice chapter, nice work. =DAuthor's Response: lol, Thanks. I liked the ending too :)
And the marauders are in Year 2 now, and thanx for the constructive critism. Thanks! Report Review
This is a nice beginning to the story, but to me it seemed very rushed- you could describe the hall and what Sirius thought as he walked into the school and stuff.
And i also spotted a couple of grammar and spelling mistakes. such as forgetting capital letters.
but i like this story, so I'm off to read the rest of it =D. Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the constructive critism, and I know it is a bit rushed. Thanks! Report Review
that chapter was cute. haAuthor's Response: Thanks Report Review
the last chapter was a little lame but this one was pretty good.Author's Response: Thanks Report Review
ur kiddin me. I WANT MORE!N ur a great rite i like it alot. im not srue im used 2 ur style, but i like the newness of it. 10/10!Author's Response: Thanks, well, I really do need to continue this story. Probably when I remake a banner for it. But anyway, thanks! And cool, I never knew I even had style! Report Review
havent reviewed for ages... sowi!!!
gr8 story cant wait to read more!
Rosie xoxAuthor's Response: dw Rozie, I no u don't go on HPFF that much any more, so thanx for reviewing! Report Review
James was from a very well known pure-blood family! He would have had very very nice robes too!!! He was Rich! He had a mansion! He was very very very well known!Author's Response: Um...thanks! I know he had nice robes to start with, but u know old Jamesie, he'd get them dirty before he reached Hogwarts! Thanks anyway Report Review
oh. I Like yes yes l like it a lot, YAHAuthor's Response: great! Report Review
I can't wait for your next chapter though i hope you'll mix some comedy into it. That would be a nice addition.Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try to. :) Report Review
the story is okay, though it would help if you put more detail into it...Author's Response: Oh O.K, I'll try Report Review
This is an awesome story! Is it a one shot? It seems like it should be a story. Oh well. You are awesome! I love it.Author's Response: Thanks soo much! no it is a longer story so hope u like the next update! Report Review
that was reali gd =)
10/10Author's Response: Thanks Report Review
i'm not really into the whole *marauders* thing but i accutually liked this story! i've never thought of what house sirius would have been in, but yeah griffindor is logical. but yeah he could have been in slytherine. i glad he wasn't! anyway 10/10 and i think i'll add to my favourites so i can keep up the story!Author's Response: AHHHHH, Have you not read the 3rd and 5th books at least ten times??? But anyway, Sirius must have been in Gryffindor as he explains in the 3rd book how he was best friends with James, Remus and Peter. And in the 5th book he explains to Harry how he was blasted off the family tapestry for being a Gryffindor blood traitor. Thanks for your review!!! Report Review
How could you portrait Sirius like that?! He was always different from the rest of his family! He'd never say 'Mudblood' and he'd never even think about it!! But a good story anyway...Author's Response: I know but think about it, Sirius's family always calls them mudbloods and as an 11 year old is quite naive. Thanks for your review. Report Review
i really like this. It's different from other stories where Sirius immediately starts hating his family..anywayz 10/10Author's Response: Thanks, I agree, some stories don't mention anything about the pureblood ways he was brought up in at all. Thanks again. Report Review
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