That was AMAZING! The way you described the feelings the the emotions it was just amazing!I don't know why but your writing style made me cry my eyes out.It was so expressive.REALLY, CONGRATULATIONS~*~Author's Response: thanks. haha. im glad that you enjoyed it and im sorry i made you cry.
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You almost feel sorry for him.
Nicely DoneAuthor's Response: haha
thanks fo reviewing
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Aweee :( poor Ron. I really like your style. And I would gladly make you a banner:
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That was pretty good. Hopefully you will find out soon where you are going to take this. I would suggest though, having Hermione feel the same way, even though Ron thinks that she has moved on, and build up plots and complications from that. Good Luck. Author's Response: thanks. i think that is useful advice and i will try and use it in my story.
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