Awesome story so far, I can't wait to see more.Author's Response: I'll tryto update soon;P Report Review
I really enjoyed the scene between Harry & Voldemort - it had a raw, bitter feel to it that made it more believable.Author's Response: All I know is that if I was put through what Harry has been that's how I would feel;P Report Review
There were quite a few grammatical/spelling errors, but i found it to be rather intriguing. It flows smoothly and has some surprising twists. :PAuthor's Response: Thanks Report Review
Very good one, I hope you can update soon.Author's Response: Thanks! Reviews mean alot to me. I can't be certain when I'll be able to ubdate, as I broke my leg about a month ago and I'll be finishing my junior year of High School in about three weeks. Very busy:( Report Review
its super good so far, and as for short i think its a really long chapter (compared to mine) 9/10 Author's Response: Thanks for the support. I was hoping for at least 3500 words. I can't wait to read your story. Chapter 2 is currently being validated. Report Review
o ah! lol! please add another long chapter really really soon!please!
i absolutely love this story and chapter!
10/10Author's Response: I have the chapter about half done, but I have a lot going on right now so I can't be sure when I can post it, plus it needs to get validated. I will try to update asap, because I know how you feel:) Report Review
yep i sure didAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. I will try and update asap;) Report Review
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