Ehh... I don't really see how you've summarised this comes in with the story, but I like it. I think it's just that the pace of the story is a bit slower than what I would normally read. Apart from that it's pretty good, only a few spelling mistakes and using "your" instead of "you're" (im annoyingly picky sometimes lol)
I hope you post the next chapter soon, I want to see if any clues come out about what Hermione was lying about. Was it to her parents about her seeing that Ilora person? Or her job or something?
6/10 =] Good work, I'll keep an eye on this fic I thinks.

Author's Response: Yea... I was thinking about changing the summary a bit. I guess it's just really hard for me to get started. As soon as it gets going you should be able to out it together better. As for the spelling I'm just using a Microsoft program so... it's the computers fault.:P

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well, that was interesting. -_-z
Malfoy spoke to her, and Ronalds not drueling over Hermione, and Harry & Ginerva are together!! I love it!! Please up-date soon, I'd love to hear all about Hermione's new year at Hogwarts' and who Mr.Head Boy is!!?? ^_- SQ16! Sends love!!

Author's Response: Thank you, but while reading this story expect the unexpected.... :P

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Please tell me she isn't going to "galavant" to some bad pub or some-thing. And who is Ilora?? I naver heard a friend of [HERMIONE's] friends in the muggle world?! She seems very nice, but sort of the opposite.?/ I loved the wonderful chapter, it really sounded nice. Its' great to read something different everyday. In every story!! Wonderful job! ^_- SQ16

Author's Response: No, no 'bad' pubs for Hermione. She still is a goody goody at heart. Ilora is a muggle friend, you've never heard of her because Hermione keeps her muggle friends secret.

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Update please!!! I want to read more! It's really good so far!Continue!

Author's Response: Next chapter in validation.

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Oh My God! I'v bin looking for something like this, sounds really interesting by the way. Do continue :`) (hey it dimpled smily)

Author's Response: Thank you! Your feedback is appreciated.

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hey, im loving it so far and cant wait to read on, please post a new chapter soon ~~~lilmiss~~~

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm working on the next chapter.

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