that first kiss was so perfectally written

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I actually thought that was a nice little plot twist. I have been wanting to read about a first hand experence of a main character in Azkaban so I can fully understand what happens in there.

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I think that the Death Eaters are using the Legilimence Spell on Fred and that is why Fred has been getting headaches all the timeand it is also how they know about the Ghostability Spell and about his relationship with Hermione.

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I think the Death Eater's knowledge has something to do with Fred's headache's. You write really well by the way

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Sorry for reviewing sooo often, but...Congrats on all the colleges! :) Love it!! Take your time!!
~Katie, 723734748393/10. teehee :D

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Legilimency, obvs!! :)

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Love it!! Sorry bout ur grandma(same a me a while ago) But.lovin' the story!!! Take your time, as long as you don't like quit, cause that would SUCK for us faithful R&R ers!! :D haha

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I want an update soon! I love these two together and I want to see more action between them. Lol! Great job!

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I think it's a bit obvious that the death eaters are using occulemency on Fred. No offence.

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Whoa! That was great. Only, You made me cry in the Azkaban scenes

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aw, poor hermione. I feel so bad for her.
10/10
I can't wait for the next chapters, i wanna see what happens to fred and hermione.

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No No im so happy its not won-won! i think fred i so much more romantic! and ron is a prat anyways!

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its good but why did u have to bring draco into this? i dont think it was a good choice but i havnt finished the story yet so i dont know what is going to happen. i like the way you write thought! 10/10

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i am literally lost for words..
i LOVED IT!
you have no idea, really.
i started bawling when i found out what happened to fred;
about him being blind and everything..
i really do wish that you would make a epilogue.
this is my favorite fred/mione fanfic yet.

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Ok I've read 11 chapters so far. I'm terrible at reviews just so you know for future reference. While I really enjoy your story I find I lok forward to your comments at the end of each chapter as much as I do the new chapter. You are talented and entrertaining and drag this old lady (really OLD) out of the depression she gets into looking in the mirror in the morning.
the one question so far is what have Fred's headaches to do with him giving up the project to Malfoy? It seems to me that they must be connected someway. Anyway keep up the good work

Author's Response: thanks sooo much!! i'm very happy to hear that i have a positive effect on someone. you see i'm a little nerd, the one who no one notices in the back of the class. to see that someone i don't even know has noticed me, makes me feel very special.
and about the headaches. . . :) keep reading!!!



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this is definitely a decent Fed/Hermione, i'm very impressed with how it is written. Good job on that. Throughout the whole story i noticed now realistically it all was written, for some reason not a lot of those are found. I loved how it ended with Fred and him not being perfect. It added to the the story as a whole. good job :)

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hey you!
this is an amazing story!
it's one of my favourites.i love the ending!
greetings,
Laura Zabini

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*sniff*
that was beautiful! =D

ooo deffinitely write an epilogue!
and be sure to include lots of kids and whether Fred ever got his eyesight back or not ;P

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HA! I was right, that is so upsetting that Fred can't hear, see or talk well, but I like the fact that it didn't all end all happy-like, gives it some realistic-ness

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I think they're using occlumency on Fred... I'm not cheating, I haven't read the rest of the story... yet

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OMG! That was amazing! I almost cried!

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O god,i love "ghostability".
it's a wonderful story!i really enjoyed it!

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welll i really love this story! i wish i had understood more chapters but it's sad all my fav. stories are enig and i;m still trying to find more good ones.! i'll so check on yur other stories!


love you work

Mrs. Laura Weasley

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OMFG!!! YOU HAVE TO HAVE AN EPILOGUE!!!

alright. I LOVED it!!! yeeep!!!

-Roz-
100/10

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This cannot be the end!
Fred said he is not free!
He must be free my dear Author, he must!

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