It's a great idea, but if you were going to rewrite it I try to make it longer between the breaks from the lyrics so its more story not so much just song 7/10 Report Review
A little hard to read. Grammer is a bit off, and the plot is sort of difficult to understand. But I do like the whole, general idea. It's intersting. If you want a banner, you can request at my website, or for more info on things like graphics, u can also check some things out (if you want)Author's Response: hey, thanks for reading! i'm pretty new to writing stories and that was a complete mistake. this story was validated twice, i had to put it through again because i changed the summary, and it passed both times with out a problem. i'll change it just incase, thanks for telling me! -sar Report Review
yay, love it saree! and i was the first to read it!Author's Response: yay! Report Review
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